Lin Lane Poet Lyric

Notes About The Poem

'ere the Glow of Dawn

~In reply to Rick's prelude shown below~


I am your rose, free of thorns
walk beside me and conceive
our spirits mingling in love
hearts singing in perfect harmony

A sweet concerto beneath the stars
duet applauded by a haloed moon
in refrain, our kisses lingering
'ere the sun casts the glow of dawn

       

~ Rick's Prelude ~
'Ere the sun sinks
and thy love falls endless
may this moment pause in beauty
to ponder thy kisses

My scarlet rose of love
betake my spirit truly
as twilight falls gently
at last my heart sings

~June 29th, 2017
Eight Lines of Beauty~Lyrics
Sponsored by: Rick Parise

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Eve Roper June 30, 2017 at 2:05 AM Very nice and romantic, Lin, a winner already ~* Lin Lane June 30, 2017 at 5:19 AM Thank you very much for such sweet thoughts, Eve.

Tim Smith June 29, 2017 at 9:42 PM You did an excellent job...so lovely...a hint of Romanian Lin Lane June 30, 2017 at 5:19 AM Thank you so much, and the Romanian was an afterthought ;-)

Winged Warrior June 29, 2017 at 7:21 PM Eight lines of beauty from lady Lin...simply said...shut the door...and enjoy the lyric's...god bless...^WW^ Lin Lane June 30, 2017 at 5:17 AM You have a way of finalizing things with your warrior style, don't you? ;-) Thanks, ^WW^

Charlie Smith June 29, 2017 at 2:25 PM Perfect response Lin, you make a lovely couple... Lin Lane June 29, 2017 at 4:06 PM lol Charlie. We haven't been introduced, but I sure like his style of writing. Thanks ever so much for stopping by and leaving your charming comments.

Chris Green June 29, 2017 at 10:16 AM This was gorgeous Lin, such a melodic response to Rick's Prelude. These two piece definitely belong together as they share the beauty of the romance. Lin Lane June 29, 2017 at 11:13 AM Thank you so very much for the comparison of the two, Chris.

Jan Allison June 29, 2017 at 10:11 AM Oh Lin this is a delightful response to Ricks poem - oh so romantic I hope it does well for you in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Lin Lane June 29, 2017 at 11:13 AM I appreciate your sweet words on this one, Jan. Thanks.

Joanna Daniel June 29, 2017 at 10:03 AM Very lovely, Lin:) a winner for me:) Lin Lane June 29, 2017 at 11:12 AM Thank you for such encouraging thoughts, Jo.

Daniel Turner June 29, 2017 at 9:33 AM Showing your romantic side this morning I see:) Lovely as always, Peaches:) Lin Lane June 29, 2017 at 11:11 AM It's peeking through just a little. Thanks, Danny.