'ere the Glow of Dawn

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~In reply to Rick's prelude shown below~


I am your rose, free of thorns
walk beside me and conceive
our spirits mingling in love
hearts singing in perfect harmony

A sweet concerto beneath the stars
duet applauded by a haloed moon
in refrain, our kisses lingering
'ere the sun casts the glow of dawn

       

~ Rick's Prelude ~
'Ere the sun sinks
and thy love falls endless
may this moment pause in beauty
to ponder thy kisses

My scarlet rose of love
betake my spirit truly
as twilight falls gently
at last my heart sings

~June 29th, 2017
Eight Lines of Beauty~Lyrics
Sponsored by: Rick Parise

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Eve Roper

Date: 6/30/2017 2:05:00 AM

Very nice and romantic, Lin, a winner already ~*

Lin Lane
Date: 6/30/2017 5:19:00 AM

Thank you very much for such sweet thoughts, Eve.

Tim Smith

Date: 6/29/2017 9:42:00 PM

You did an excellent job...so lovely...a hint of Romanian

Lin Lane
Date: 6/30/2017 5:19:00 AM

Thank you so much, and the Romanian was an afterthought ;-)

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/29/2017 7:21:00 PM

Eight lines of beauty from lady Lin...simply said...shut the door...and enjoy the lyric's...god bless...^WW^

Lin Lane
Date: 6/30/2017 5:17:00 AM

You have a way of finalizing things with your warrior style, don't you? ;-) Thanks, ^WW^

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/29/2017 2:25:00 PM

Perfect response Lin, you make a lovely couple...

Lin Lane
Date: 6/29/2017 4:06:00 PM

lol Charlie. We haven't been introduced, but I sure like his style of writing. Thanks ever so much for stopping by and leaving your charming comments.

Chris Green

Date: 6/29/2017 10:16:00 AM

This was gorgeous Lin, such a melodic response to Rick's Prelude. These two piece definitely belong together as they share the beauty of the romance.

Lin Lane
Date: 6/29/2017 11:13:00 AM

Thank you so very much for the comparison of the two, Chris.