Erased

From the face of this earth
people think i've died
but i've actually been replaced
by this face
that looks so familiar to most
but to others a ghost
has come into existence
and this instant
is changing
rearranging life as it should be be
with for you and love for me
no war for you, no war for you
peace with us
I love is worth more than anything
to my love, love you did bring
everything about you makes me smile
your walk
your talk 
your courtesy
The fact that you would go a mile just so you can
see me smile....
The way you hold me
kiss me 
please me
its our destiny to connect
the dots and
cross the word
puzzle and finally
see where we stand in this game
called life
but I feel i've been 
erased
from the face of this earth
no one knows just who I am
or how I feel
being a shadow to the unreal
but no worries,
I am replaced.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 4/8/2016 2:06:00 AM
Melaney Bridges, well done. linda
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Date: 7/4/2015 12:45:00 AM
Melaney, stumbled across this poem. Thanks for sharing. Have yourself a safe and Happy 4th of July.... Love SKAT
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