Erase the Pain of My Lips

Sensation
I need in desperation
with your lips I adoringly trace in my deep imagination, 
inch by inch...slowly...feel it's softness dry in sweet aspiration
fingers tremble, shaking in adoration.

Saw you bite your lips
hmn...smiled in devil sleek
eyes are staring so intensely, I leap
burning my desire as I blushed red on my cheeks! 

Then urge arises, as we come deeper
amidst of our talks and burning calls, 
we felt the desire, express it clearer
how we love the intense of our lust together! 

"Erase the pain of my lips", you said
trace me with your tongue as I laid
from these dreams we made and plan in real
come, touch me with your lips, erase my pain!

 
Inner Whispers
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Callus Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 2:17 PM
A romantic write where imagination, expectation and anticipation create the perfect atmosphere. Much enjoyed:) // paul
Whispers Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 1:57 AM
Hi Paul! You mak m smil...thanks! Be great today please....
Lamoureux Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 8:22 AM
This is my favorite so far. Subtle, erotic and romantic.
Whispers Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 1:56 AM
:) also mine, Richard. Thank you...
Allison Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 5:56 PM
Beautifully written romantic poem and love the name Inner Whispers. Jan x
Whispers Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 5:24 AM
Thanks for dropping your kind impression, Jan Allison! Good day!
Makama Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 4:52 PM
This is awesome and definitely a 7 for me! Keep up with the excellent work. You are highly welcome to Poetry soup, a community of mind blowing, soul piercing and intrigue creating poets! I hope to check back on you again. This is really, really so good
Whispers Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 5:25 AM
Thank you my dear Funom Makama...your good impressions inspire me more!
Walker  Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 2:20 PM
Beautifully written Inner... Enjoy my visit... Verlena
Whispers Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 11:47 PM
thank you Verlena...an honor!
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