Erase the Pain

ERASE MY PAIN
The flaming flower is stoked by the air of the spring Pristine beauty in colors flashes on the face it gets anew Flirting butterflies carry its alluring motif on their wings The petals are curled at dusk by the fierce dust storm The hurt flower doesn’t know where it’d get solace from Bruised grace it restores at new dawn with touch of dew. My heart blossomed in the spate of florid ecstasy When you drizzled on me like amorous autumn rain Drenched in desire I felt the nascent love grow in me In surging summer storm in my life you drifted away Broke my heart, the silent pain I couldn’t even convey For a new dawn I wait, your dew touch to erase my pain.
May 5, 2018.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 5/11/2018 5:52:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Subimal, with this beautiful poem.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/15/2018 12:43:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 5/11/2018 1:37:00 PM
Wow, a very powerful poem Subimal. Congratulations for your win :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/15/2018 12:43:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
Date: 5/11/2018 1:00:00 PM
wow sweet Subimal, great poem from start to finish! loved the metaphors and great rhythm and rhyme. Thank you and congratulations on your placement :) -luloo
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Date: 5/15/2018 12:42:00 AM
Thank you, Laura for your encouraging comments.
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