Equinox

The equinox is days away,
the only day that's equal,
both night and day-
get a say.

It's social anarchism-
on a universal scale.
perpetuated by a mysterious veil,
that society ignores completely.



- I found it comical when I thought about how the universe has two days dedicated to
appeasing both day and night and equalizing the seasons, when most humans can't stop
squabbling over money for an hour.

Here's praying for humanity's equinox....whenever that may happen or if...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Onclaud Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 10:05 PM
i like astronomy and this piece engaged me so, michael... superb! nette
Hilliker Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 5:08 PM
Nice piece. PS - it is comical. :-)
Kendrick Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 4:29 PM
Would be nice if we could have an equinox of peace for all the world..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Culverhouse Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 4:15 PM
Micheal, you sound "hopeful" on my state and the state of the universe...LOL I guess my hope is to get where I can over look lifes trials. thanks for your comments!
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