John Gondolf Poet Rhyme

Equilibrium

Equilibrium 

Sometimes . . .  when dark clouds fill the skies,
the world seems out of balance and cries. 

But then . . . as two hearts touch in the darkness,

suddenly . . . the equilibrium of life is restored,
clouds disappear, and the sun begins to shine once more.


June 17, 2022

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Line Gauthier November 10, 2022 at 3:11 PM Beautfiul, John ~ full of hope. Congrats onjyoru top placement! John Gondolf November 11, 2022 at 7:17 AM Thank you so much, Line, I appreciate it. John

David Smith August 16, 2022 at 4:36 PM Spot on in every way. Some hearts have capacity to store sunshine for when the clouds appear. Hopefully one day most will understand that. In the mean time poems like this need to be written. Take care David in NZ John Gondolf August 16, 2022 at 7:04 PM Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts and comments, David, I really appreciate your kind words. Cheers, John

Sheri Evans July 13, 2022 at 10:46 PM so true. John Gondolf July 14, 2022 at 2:53 AM Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Sheri, I appreciate you. John

Nancy Kaufman July 12, 2022 at 4:29 PM the imagery and simplicity make this such a lovely and uplifting poem. John Gondolf July 12, 2022 at 5:08 PM Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Nancy, I appreciate it. John

Brandy Nicole July 5, 2022 at 4:46 PM Congratulations John, on having this poem in the #2 spot on the best new poems list. Hugs, Brandy John Gondolf July 6, 2022 at 4:53 AM Thank you for noticing, Brandy, I appreciate you. I am surprised that it is placed so high. Hugs, John

Shirley Hawkins July 1, 2022 at 4:11 AM Congratulations, John, on coming Ist in the contest. It is a beautiful poem full of love and hope for a brighter future. Many people would find comfort in the words of your poem. Take care, Shirley John Gondolf July 3, 2022 at 8:31 AM Thank you so much, Shirley, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John

Andrea Dietrich June 26, 2022 at 12:34 PM that's wonderful. I was just going to say, I bet she chooses it as a winner, and then I saw you DID win. Congrats!! John Gondolf June 27, 2022 at 2:43 AM Thank you so much, Andrea, I appreciate it. John

Paulette Calasibetta June 26, 2022 at 9:16 AM Congratulations on your win in the contest. Your poem filled with immense emotion....beautiful! :)Paulette John Gondolf June 27, 2022 at 2:42 AM Thank you, Paulette, I appreciate it. John

Brandy Nicole June 24, 2022 at 6:20 PM I knew this was a winner, the moment I read it. Such beautiful, yet tender words from the depth of your heart. Congratulations John, on this win. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy John Gondolf June 26, 2022 at 5:02 AM Thank you my sweet friend, I appreciate your encouragement and inspiration. You’re the best. Hugs, John

Karen Jones June 24, 2022 at 1:19 PM Wonderfully engaging love this! Great job on 1st place win John Gondolf June 26, 2022 at 4:38 AM Thank you so much, Karen, I appreciate it. I’m glad you enjoyed it. John

Connie Marcum Wong June 24, 2022 at 2:59 AM I am so happy to see this win a trophy John. Congratulations! Superb writing! Blessings xxoo John Gondolf June 24, 2022 at 3:05 AM Thank you, Connie. This is something that a scribbled at 3 am one morning last week; I wasn’t sure about posting it. Hugs, John

Christuraj Alex June 23, 2022 at 8:27 PM Very beautiful work. Congratulations! John Gondolf June 24, 2022 at 2:33 AM Thank you, Christuraj, I appreciate it. John

Edward Ibeh June 23, 2022 at 4:09 PM This poem just takes the breath away. Brilliant piece, John. Well-deserved win! John Gondolf June 23, 2022 at 6:47 PM Thanks so much, Edward, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John

Paula Goldsmith June 23, 2022 at 7:19 AM Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write. Have a great/blessed day....................... John Gondolf June 23, 2022 at 7:37 AM Thank you so much, Paula, I appreciate it. John

Beata Agustin June 22, 2022 at 1:05 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me delight poetically over your equilibrium's essence. John Gondolf June 23, 2022 at 2:45 AM Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, Beats, I appreciate it. John

Paghunda Zahid June 20, 2022 at 12:43 AM Indeed.. Your bite size is lovely.. Good luck in the contest John Gondolf June 20, 2022 at 6:19 AM Thanks for your comments, Paghunda. JOhn

Brandy Nicole June 17, 2022 at 6:43 PM . . . And that is all it takes, my sweet friend. Once those clouds have scurried away, brightness fills the day. Such a wonderful moment indeed, when all is as it should be. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. In my favorites, these words belong. Hugs, Brandy John Gondolf June 18, 2022 at 4:49 AM Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, Brandy, your thoughts are always do inspiring and are much appreciated. Thank you for saving this to for favorites. Hugs, John

Connie Marcum Wong June 17, 2022 at 9:14 AM An inspiring poem expressing how love balances life. Beautiful John. I hope to see this one on the winner’s list. Blessings xxoo John Gondolf June 18, 2022 at 4:43 AM I believe that without love our skies would be dark all the time. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Connie, I appreciate it. Hugs, John

Jenna Logan June 17, 2022 at 5:01 AM Sometimes all it takes to brighten our sky is a smile from a loved one. Sweet thoughts for a Friday morning, John. John Gondolf June 18, 2022 at 4:37 AM Thank you, Jenna, your thoughts brighten my sky. Have a great weekend. John

Tom Cunningham June 17, 2022 at 4:23 AM Love will always shine in the darkness, good luck in the contest John. Hope you're keeping well. Tom John Gondolf June 18, 2022 at 4:24 AM So true, Tom, if only there was more love in the world. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. John