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Equations Contest Sponsor: Anthony Slausen Equivalence not matching in between your speechless lies Quandary from lifeless lessons as my sanity cries Uneven desires, us two shouldn't be bound together Agreements not satisfied since you became a possessor Terms of endearment ripped apart on your black paper Insinuations regretted while you prefer to be a dictator Other factors have been added within the last two minutes Negligent answers, my fear and dread have reached the limit
Our correspondence has locked me deep inside your dungeon, you're nothing but a problem I could never begin to solve, negative attitude with problems beyond your dark disfunction, my inner self tells me this situation will never be resolved. no more connection lost identification sum of loss breaks me Date Written: March 5, 2016

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Date: 3/14/2016 8:45:00 PM
Well done, Laura...congrats!
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Date: 3/15/2016 7:25:00 PM
Thank you very much Lin :)-luloo
Date: 3/14/2016 7:26:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Luloo
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Date: 3/15/2016 7:24:00 PM
thank you very much Joseph :)-luloo
Date: 3/6/2016 10:10:00 AM
wow, this challenge topic really spoke to your soul. All I see in that word is math!! I hope I can match the passion of yours when I try this one!!
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Date: 3/6/2016 8:51:00 PM
Thank you Andrea :)-luloo
Date: 3/5/2016 5:07:00 PM
You have obviously put a lot of thought into this one. Really enjoyed the read. Good luck, Laura. Peace dear friend:)
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Date: 3/5/2016 5:09:00 PM
Thank you very much DT... -luloo *smiles*
Date: 3/5/2016 3:53:00 PM
This must be as cathartic as it is well written. It does not read made up. Best wishes, not only for the contest Charlie
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Date: 3/5/2016 4:57:00 PM
Thank you Charlie...-luloo
Date: 3/5/2016 3:24:00 PM
Laura, WOW what a powerful write, wonderfully penned, and I am loving this 7 ~
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Date: 3/5/2016 4:56:00 PM
Thank you Broken Wings...-luloo *smiles*
Date: 3/5/2016 2:21:00 PM
Loved the read wishing you the best on the contest!
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Date: 3/5/2016 2:23:00 PM
Thank you Robert...:)-luloo

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