Equations

Equations Contest
Sponsor: Anthony Slausen


Equivalence not matching in between your speechless lies
Quandary from lifeless lessons as my sanity cries
Uneven desires, us two shouldn't be bound together
Agreements not satisfied since you became a possessor
Terms of endearment ripped apart on your black paper
Insinuations regretted while you prefer to be a dictator
Other factors have been added within the last two minutes
Negligent answers, my fear and dread have reached the limit


Our correspondence has locked me deep inside your dungeon, you're nothing but a problem I could never begin to solve, negative attitude with problems beyond your dark disfunction, my inner self tells me this situation will never be resolved. no more connection lost identification sum of loss breaks me Date Written: March 5, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lane Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 8:45 PM
Well done, Laura...congrats!
Scars Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 7:25 PM
Thank you very much Lin :)-luloo
May Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 7:26 PM
Congrats on a fine win Luloo
Scars Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 7:24 PM
thank you very much Joseph :)-luloo
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 10:10 AM
wow, this challenge topic really spoke to your soul. All I see in that word is math!! I hope I can match the passion of yours when I try this one!!
Scars Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 8:51 PM
Thank you Andrea :)-luloo
Turner Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 5:07 PM
You have obviously put a lot of thought into this one. Really enjoyed the read. Good luck, Laura. Peace dear friend:)
Scars Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 5:09 PM
Thank you very much DT... -luloo *smiles*
Smith Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 3:53 PM
This must be as cathartic as it is well written. It does not read made up. Best wishes, not only for the contest Charlie
Scars Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 4:57 PM
Thank you Charlie...-luloo
La France Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 3:24 PM
Laura, WOW what a powerful write, wonderfully penned, and I am loving this 7 ~
Scars Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 4:56 PM
Thank you Broken Wings...-luloo *smiles*
Heemstra Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 2:21 PM
Loved the read wishing you the best on the contest!
Scars Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 2:23 PM
Thank you Robert...:)-luloo
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