Kash Poet Poet Tanka

Equally Sinner

Blood stains on my hand
though I never touched a gun,
every bullet fired
splashes blood on both our hands,
each death leaves a scar in heart!



'Dedicated to those deaths which can be avoided,which make us feel sinner'


© kashinath karmakar (6th July 2011)
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Placement : 10th (October 2011)

Contest:A Short Poem,Please

Sponsor:Constance La France

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John Freeman September 3, 2011 at 11:28 AM The paranormal will heal, Kashinath......congratulations on your poem's worthiness. Agape, Moses

Jack Horne September 3, 2011 at 10:26 AM Many congratulations, Kash : )

Lori Lucas Mcclure September 3, 2011 at 10:18 AM Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!------Lori

Caryl Ramsdale September 3, 2011 at 3:25 AM A Tenth Place Win Congratulations. CR

Margaret Foster September 2, 2011 at 4:55 AM Thought provoking Kash. well written. regards Marg

Lee Ramage September 2, 2011 at 1:11 AM Congratulations on your win. Lee

Wilma Neels September 1, 2011 at 4:30 PM A beautiful and meaningful write Kash, congratulations to you ;)

Carol Sunshine Brown September 1, 2011 at 2:17 PM Congratulations on your placement in Constance La France's "A Short Poem, Please" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson September 1, 2011 at 1:22 PM Very heart felt writing. Should have placed higher. Love, Joyce

Carrie Richards September 1, 2011 at 11:55 AM Powerfully said....wow...kashinath there is a punch in each word!

David Williams September 1, 2011 at 11:39 AM hey kash congrats on another great win..David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 1, 2011 at 11:33 AM Congrats Kash on another great big win with profound poetry as this luv... great dedication and many share this sentiment too..

Dinda Minardi September 1, 2011 at 11:13 AM Very creative, Kashinath. Congratulations! :)

Dr.Ram Mehta September 1, 2011 at 11:09 AM Congratulations on the win, kashinath

Andrea Dietrich July 7, 2011 at 11:13 PM Very interesting one from you, Kash, gosh, what made you think of this!! Is it for a contest? soupmail

Carolyn Devonshire July 7, 2011 at 12:59 PM This is so true, Kash. I wish everyone could understand that "each death leaves a scar" on all of our hearts. We'd live in a more peaceful world. Love,Carolyn

Jack Horne July 7, 2011 at 10:57 AM Loved this deep, powerful write, Kash.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 7, 2011 at 8:49 AM Wow, very gripping tanka you have here, Kashinath and thought provoking, too, seems like sometimes, we are indirectly responsible and also have blood on our hands...

Nette Onclaud July 7, 2011 at 4:25 AM when's the next treat, kashi.?.:) i did a tanka... come on over! huggs, nette

Dr.Ram Mehta July 6, 2011 at 2:57 PM Lovely message very deep, kashinath

Dan Kearley July 6, 2011 at 12:03 PM Oh,so dark.Very good.

Nette Onclaud July 6, 2011 at 11:28 AM gripping, kashi... i drool over this winning material.. whoo! :) hugggs and come visit! nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 6, 2011 at 9:12 AM powerful piece Kashinath and poignant last line luv.. your title says it all my friend.. another absolutely amazing one..luv..

Elizabeth Wesley July 6, 2011 at 8:35 AM Gave me shivers - well said Kash!