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Equality At the Hands of Men

Man so mighty and wise still has to define this that another living being's life has the same value as his Boasted, brazened written in stone raised above these highest places where power reigns crushing down in white clenched fists gripping so tightly to "history" squeezing draining the meaning out of good intention Those stones are weeping as grass grows quietly around the edges The future chipping crumbling forgotten Differences are best listed to be used like lines in the sand some seen on the skin most are though beneath tracing tearing a cross marking the surface this land of the free that the privileged paid for from sea to sea with the lives of lesser men and their women up for "grabs" The women best when big breasted beautiful and begging feeding their daughters dreams of a better tomorrow when that white clenched fist stops squeezing her **** before slapping lips against her drooling over her in her ear whispering something sweet like "Honey you're mine" What lines of defense Those lines lie on paper written, signed and etched by those elected and chosen statesmen stating authority over your body their dolls their toys smiling serving their purpose the good Word stenciled in stone Equality carved out in flesh fresh cadavers swept under the rug serving their purpose Gravestones weeping as grass grows quiety around the edges The memory chipping crumbling forgotten Keeping their hands clean they wipe their mouths red blood on their stained sleeves the polish from their shiny shoes sully the stars and stripes stripped of the value they once held when they stiched us all together and brought so many strangers home How white clenched fists hold power and privelege held so high in esteem like our stars and stripes teetering, unraveling the threads shaking as if stripped naked and forced to wave above that Capitol Hill pivotal and still unchanging unmoved Our Lady liberty holds a tattered gown

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/12/2020 9:24:00 PM
wow! great write...I missed this somehow but glad I found it a few years later! :)
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Date: 1/8/2018 1:42:00 PM
A tremendous first offering to the soup. My wife works with young women with eating disorders. One of the triggers is a lack of self. Men and fathers play a big part in this lack of self. Here's to raising a generation of empowered women. You might enjoy my poem "Girl Rising". I enjoyed reading your work this morning.
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I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen
Date: 4/10/2018 3:21:00 AM
Thanks so much Richard. Indeed the lack of 'self' in both men and women is a recurring issue from generation to generation, and we are all impacted; even in subtle ways that often go unnoticed. I say "Here here" to raising a generation of empowered people, women and men who seek their truth, and who cultivate authenticity, self-love and non-judgment.
Date: 12/23/2017 11:25:00 AM
bit of a rant ... yes ...
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I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen
Date: 2/27/2018 5:19:00 AM
Perhaps so :D Thanks for reading and for commenting.
Date: 12/9/2017 4:17:00 PM
Well-done, Sarah - congratulations on your win, my friend ... blessings, and keep writing on! :-)
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Date: 2/27/2018 5:19:00 AM
Thanks very much!
Date: 11/27/2017 8:15:00 AM
Sarah, those last three lines add an exclamation point to this amazing write.
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I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen
Date: 11/27/2017 8:21:00 AM
Thank you John. I'm glad this piece has reached you. :)
Date: 11/26/2017 9:43:00 PM
Marvelous write, Sarah, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen
Date: 11/27/2017 3:16:00 AM
Thanks very much Eve!
Date: 11/26/2017 8:35:00 PM
Well here you are Sara - a great entry & it truly makes an important point! congrad's, Light & Love
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I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen
Date: 11/27/2017 4:04:00 AM
Thanks Debbie! I am delighted :D
Date: 11/23/2017 5:20:00 PM
sara this is MOST excellent verse! please check your soup mail-Light & Love
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I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen
Date: 11/24/2017 2:54:00 AM
Hello, debbie. I think i managed to send you a soup mail. If you didn't receive it let me know :)
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 11/23/2017 5:21:00 PM
oops you have none? maybe you can soupmail me?
Date: 11/10/2017 11:20:00 PM
Razor sharp pen <3
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I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen
Date: 11/27/2017 4:03:00 AM
Thanks very much Maureen! :D

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