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Epoch of Time

Amidst the vortex of empty time, going back a calumnious climb, To change a love my only crime, sweet surrender of life sublime… The Time Machines are ready still, sending me back upon my will, To gain back love I shall fulfill, amongst meadows of the daffodil. Evaporating reflections in my eyes, hands of time turning clockwise, May the love we had apprise, as I look at the darkened distant skies… The stars align for I await and the planets rebuttal in their debate, The Time Keepers guard the gate, within their arms I leave my fate. In perpetuation of times expanse, chronological clocks in romance, Cupid’s arrow is ready to lance, while my heart prepares to dance… I approach my love once more, will their love palpitate with a pour, Guardians of time open their door as I awake out of bed on the floor. Oct.07.2019 ...turn back the hands of time Sponsored by: Silent One Placed 2'nd...Thank You
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Milgate Avatar
October 29, 2019 at 7:14 PM
I listened to your poem and thought what a voice and poem, last sentence!! a hoot?
Hopper Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 4:18 PM
Absolutely beautiful
Marc Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 7:43 AM
Take my breath away ~ congrats on the win :)
Hamilton Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 7:39 AM
What a write WW, you know I love your internal rhymes and unique phraseology, I actually understood every word, congrats on a great 2nd place win!
Gupta Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 11:47 PM
What a rhyme replete with rhythmic music, WW ... Wonderful ... Congratulations on your nice win in the contest ....
Lindley Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 9:49 AM
My friend, this exceptional piece blew me away! Its depths, insight, poetic inspirations are spectacular and a great pleasure to encounter as one is reading this gleaming gem. Congratulations on your win and this is a fav..
Mcintosh Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 2:58 AM
Wow. Awesome writing. Love it. God bless you and Congrats. Love, Gina
Sands Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 12:45 PM
Congratulations for your win WW :)
One Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 12:27 PM
your vocabulary is on a different planet.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Perrin Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 6:58 AM
I love this beauty of a poem, definitely a fav :-) x
Michael Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 8:27 AM
I like this...enjoyed the read...Imagine after all..."I awake out of bed on the floor."
Adams Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 9:06 PM
lol...sometimes to turn back time and walk the same path would mean the same end result i think...love this clever write...i am sure this one will be on the winner's list... hugs :)
Riabi Dziri Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 3:17 AM
Wow for so soaring a journey through time! Other moments back in time if ever given! So splendid! So thrilling to taste and experience! So brilliant of you, Winged Warrior to make us part of your wonderful dream! An amazing poetry worthy of a rewarding placement in the contest.. A FAV and a win! My warmest regards and blessings.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 4:40 PM
LOL! I have a feeling two souls play out their cards the same the second time around even if a second chance emerges but who knows. :) Kim-my
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