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Epoch of Time

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Amidst the vortex of empty time, going back a calumnious climb, To change a love my only crime, sweet surrender of life sublime… The Time Machines are ready still, sending me back upon my will, To gain back love I shall fulfill, amongst meadows of the daffodil. Evaporating reflections in my eyes, hands of time turning clockwise, May the love we had apprise, as I look at the darkened distant skies… The stars align for I await and the planets rebuttal in their debate, The Time Keepers guard the gate, within their arms I leave my fate. In perpetuation of times expanse, chronological clocks in romance, Cupid’s arrow is ready to lance, while my heart prepares to dance… I approach my love once more, will their love palpitate with a pour, Guardians of time open their door as I awake out of bed on the floor. Oct.07.2019 ...turn back the hands of time Sponsored by: Silent One Placed 2'nd...Thank You

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Linda Milgate

Date: 10/29/2019 7:14:00 PM

I listened to your poem and thought what a voice and poem, last sentence!! a hoot?

Anna Hopper

Date: 10/28/2019 4:18:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful

P.M. Richter

Date: 10/21/2019 7:43:00 AM

Take my breath away ~ congrats on the win :)

John Hamilton

Date: 10/17/2019 7:39:00 AM

What a write WW, you know I love your internal rhymes and unique phraseology, I actually understood every word, congrats on a great 2nd place win!

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/15/2019 11:47:00 PM

What a rhyme replete with rhythmic music, WW ... Wonderful ... Congratulations on your nice win in the contest ....

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/15/2019 9:49:00 AM

My friend, this exceptional piece blew me away! Its depths, insight, poetic inspirations are spectacular and a great pleasure to encounter as one is reading this gleaming gem. Congratulations on your win and this is a fav..

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/15/2019 2:58:00 AM

Wow. Awesome writing. Love it. God bless you and Congrats. Love, Gina

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/14/2019 12:45:00 PM

Congratulations for your win WW :)

Silent One

Date: 10/14/2019 12:27:00 PM

your vocabulary is on a different planet.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/13/2019 6:58:00 AM

I love this beauty of a poem, definitely a fav :-) x

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/10/2019 8:27:00 AM

I like this...enjoyed the read...Imagine after all..."I awake out of bed on the floor."

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/8/2019 9:06:00 PM

lol...sometimes to turn back time and walk the same path would mean the same end result i think...love this clever write...i am sure this one will be on the winner's list... hugs :)

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 10/8/2019 3:17:00 AM

Wow for so soaring a journey through time! Other moments back in time if ever given! So splendid! So thrilling to taste and experience! So brilliant of you, Winged Warrior to make us part of your wonderful dream! An amazing poetry worthy of a rewarding placement in the contest.. A FAV and a win! My warmest regards and blessings.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/7/2019 4:40:00 PM

LOL! I have a feeling two souls play out their cards the same the second time around even if a second chance emerges but who knows. :) Kim-my