Epiphany

Epiphany 

It was an incredible summer in 1950 the war was over things were getting 
back to normal, mother`s new boyfriend who worked at a factory had 
a rowboat and paid holiday leave. A Sunday early we rowed to a small island 
in the bay, mother had brought a blanket, sandwiches in brown paper bags
mostly jam I think and two bottles of soft drink, water and cold milk that sun 
went off, and a thermos flask of coffee. The boyfriend gave me a line with 
hook on told me to go fishing- telling me what to do is not easy not even for me-
 in the shallow water near the pier as bait, I found a worm under a stone thread 
the living thing on the fishhook.
the water was crystal clear had tiny fishes that looked like rainbows swimming 
about I saw the sky….I was in a trance thought I was what I saw took a step 
forward and landed in the water people came running helping me up back I was 
in real time mother came running too shouted at me as mothers do and worried
about my delicate health. Rowing back into town again the boyfriend was grumpy 
suggested I had fallen into the water to get attention I said little in my defence
how could I explain for a moment I had understood everything, but on the other 
hand he could have been right how is a boy supposed to know

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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