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Ephemeral Life

We take a deep breath Hold it for a while, exhale No more breaths allowed! (C) Demetrios Trifiatis 07 September 2015

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Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/8/2015 3:06:00 AM

Your descriptive is eloquent....a well beautiful write.........A.M.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/8/2015 5:27:00 AM

Thank you my kind friend, Afolabi, for your visit and wonderful comment!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/8/2015 1:57:00 AM

Well you never know when is that last one Demetrios! Excellent pen!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/8/2015 5:15:00 AM

This is true, Dr. Upma. It is better that way. The question is what we are doing till the moment comes. Thank you!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/7/2015 5:05:00 PM

a beautiful yet said haiku Demetrios:-) hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/8/2015 5:40:00 AM

Thank you, Jan for visiting and commenting so nicely!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/7/2015 3:07:00 PM

a last breath before seeing the Light.. beautiful 'ku, D... you spill ink!.. huggs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/8/2015 5:46:00 AM

Yes, Nette, hope to see the light! Thank you!

Anu Nayak

Date: 9/7/2015 2:44:00 PM

What a reality embedded in this beautifully penned haiku dear Demetrios.uncertain timing of death but certain to come...no escape....i appreciate how secretly it operates.....and decides when to take away whose breath...a 7! For this truthful piece....love, Anu:-)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/8/2015 5:45:00 AM

Thank you, once more, for your lovely visit and appreciative comment dear, Anulaxmi!

Michael Tor

Date: 9/7/2015 1:36:00 PM

Were only here for a short while so enjoy every minute. Beautiful Demetrios. Excellent.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/7/2015 1:45:00 PM

The emphasis my friend, Michael, is on the inevitability of death and the singularity of life. Thank you for your visit. So kind of you!

Tim Smith

Date: 9/7/2015 1:19:00 PM

Make every breath count and live life like it is your last.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/7/2015 1:43:00 PM

I think you have missed the point my friend, Tim. Thank you for the visit!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/7/2015 1:00:00 PM

Oh...this is a sad poem, my dear poet. Every day we live is written in His book. Wishing you blessings.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/7/2015 2:15:00 PM

Yes, it is sad but it is the brute truth. Of course, we have love, poetry, art to embellish our life but the brute truth remains. Thank you my loving friend, Eileen for your visit. Have a wonderful vacation in the country of which you love the language.