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Poet Monorhyme

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Poetic Form: Monorhyme

Inspired: 2023 November 05

*10th Place*
NO 1257 NEW POEM ONLY
Contest Judged: 2023 November 13
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Ephemeral Existence

Revelry peculiars the incandescent cavalcade
making purple flowers loosen touch of its aide
as nothing hides in place of spotlight charade
for velvety leathers surrender every escapade
useful issues from its lifeline withering in trade
salient rise o'er frayed sins the earth weighed.

absenceconflictdepressiondesireemotionsmonorhyme

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Sam Kauffman

November 21, 2023 at 12:39 PM

Oh, William, your use of original words in this monorhyme just makes my toes tingle, hoa'aloha! No tired, overused words for you! You search for deeper meaning and more artistic expression through your majestic words - cavalcade, charade, escapade! This is a "salient" gem. Blessings! Mahalo! Hau'oli ho'omaikai'i!

William Kelii Kekaula

November 21, 2023 at 4:01 PM

Aloha, Sam of the hour and e'ermore. I'm glad of its self-worth as Brian's interprets of that to be. Mahalo for your exceptional courtesies you've expressed. I am blessed, hoa'aloha nui. A hu'i hou, William

Sotto Poet

November 6, 2023 at 5:01 AM

The poem you have crafted exhibits a remarkable finesse. Your utilization of captivating imagery and playful elements succeeds in illuminating pleasant reflections on the transitory nature of our being. Particularly, the final line, which elegantly captures the prominence of overcoming our faults amidst the burdens of life, is skillfully articulated. Appreciate your comment on my page.

William Kelii Kekaula

November 6, 2023 at 8:17 AM

A gracious welcome, my friend, as it is always a newness that entertains my eyes in the scope of your talented quill! Again, I am forever appreciative of your visits and illuminating commentaries, Lasaad! Aloha always, William

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