Envy

Envy looked at the mirror; the reflection was green with jealousy. 08/19/2016 Note : For the contest (monoku madness) by John Hamilton. *Placed Third*

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/29/2016 5:03:00 AM

This one is really clever:) congratulations on your placement:)

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/29/2016 5:57:00 AM

Thank you very much, Jo.

Lu Loo

Date: 8/23/2016 4:08:00 PM

Afzal, very wise :) congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/23/2016 11:02:00 PM

Thank you, Laura.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/22/2016 7:14:00 AM

This is clever and made me laugh! I loved it Afzal!Congratulations on your high placement! 7 ; )

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/23/2016 12:11:00 AM

Thank you very much, Connie.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/22/2016 7:04:00 AM

VERY clever Afzal - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/23/2016 12:10:00 AM

Thank you, Jan.

Janis Thompson

Date: 8/21/2016 10:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your win.

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/21/2016 11:42:00 PM

Thank you, Janis.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/21/2016 8:56:00 PM

Oh perfect monoku, Afzal, Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/21/2016 11:41:00 PM

Thanx Eve, for your kind words.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2016 8:18:00 PM

wow, a very clever one this is! Congrats on the fine win

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/21/2016 11:40:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea for being so gracious with me.

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/21/2016 4:59:00 PM

Hi Afzal, Great one-liner. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/21/2016 11:38:00 PM

Thank you very much, Alexis.

John Hamilton

Date: 8/21/2016 4:13:00 PM

Well done thanks for a great entry!

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/21/2016 11:31:00 PM

Thank you very much, John.

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/19/2016 3:31:00 PM

Well done Afzal, good luck in the contest...

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/19/2016 8:19:00 PM

Thank you very much, Charlie.