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Envy

Envy looked at the mirror; the reflection was green with jealousy. 08/19/2016 Note : For the contest (monoku madness) by John Hamilton. *Placed Third*

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Joanna Daniel
Date: 8/29/2016 5:03:00 AM
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This one is really clever:) congratulations on your placement:)
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/29/2016 5:57:00 AM
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Thank you very much, Jo.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/23/2016 4:08:00 PM
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Afzal, very wise :) congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/23/2016 11:02:00 PM
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Thank you, Laura.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/22/2016 7:14:00 AM
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This is clever and made me laugh! I loved it Afzal!Congratulations on your high placement! 7 ; )
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/23/2016 12:11:00 AM
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Thank you very much, Connie.
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/22/2016 7:04:00 AM
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VERY clever Afzal - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/23/2016 12:10:00 AM
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Thank you, Jan.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 8/21/2016 10:55:00 PM
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Congratulations on your win.
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/21/2016 11:42:00 PM
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Thank you, Janis.
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/21/2016 8:56:00 PM
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Oh perfect monoku, Afzal, Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/21/2016 11:41:00 PM
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Thanx Eve, for your kind words.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/21/2016 8:18:00 PM
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wow, a very clever one this is! Congrats on the fine win
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/21/2016 11:40:00 PM
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Thank you, Andrea for being so gracious with me.
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Alexis Y.
Date: 8/21/2016 4:59:00 PM
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Hi Afzal, Great one-liner. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/21/2016 11:38:00 PM
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Thank you very much, Alexis.
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/21/2016 4:13:00 PM
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Well done thanks for a great entry!
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/21/2016 11:31:00 PM
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Thank you very much, John.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/19/2016 3:31:00 PM
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Well done Afzal, good luck in the contest...
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/19/2016 8:19:00 PM
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Thank you very much, Charlie.

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