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Envy

Envy looked at the mirror; the reflection was green with jealousy.


08/19/2016

Note : For the contest (monoku madness) by John Hamilton.
          *Placed Third*

Copyright © Afzal Nusker | Year Posted 2016

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August 29, 2016 at 5:03 AM

This one is really clever:) congratulations on your placement:)

August 29, 2016 at 5:57 AM

Thank you very much, Jo.

Beautiful Scars

August 23, 2016 at 4:08 PM

Afzal, very wise :) congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

August 23, 2016 at 11:02 PM

Thank you, Laura.

Connie Marcum Wong

August 22, 2016 at 7:14 AM

This is clever and made me laugh! I loved it Afzal!Congratulations on your high placement! 7 ; )

August 23, 2016 at 12:11 AM

Thank you very much, Connie.

August 22, 2016 at 7:04 AM

VERY clever Afzal - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

August 23, 2016 at 12:10 AM

Thank you, Jan.

Janis Medders Tobechi

August 21, 2016 at 10:55 PM

Congratulations on your win.

August 21, 2016 at 11:42 PM

Thank you, Janis.

August 21, 2016 at 8:56 PM

Oh perfect monoku, Afzal, Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

August 21, 2016 at 11:41 PM

Thanx Eve, for your kind words.

Andrea Dietrich

August 21, 2016 at 8:18 PM

wow, a very clever one this is! Congrats on the fine win

August 21, 2016 at 11:40 PM

Thank you, Andrea for being so gracious with me.

August 21, 2016 at 4:59 PM

Hi Afzal, Great one-liner. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

August 21, 2016 at 11:38 PM

Thank you very much, Alexis.

August 21, 2016 at 4:13 PM

Well done thanks for a great entry!

August 21, 2016 at 11:31 PM

Thank you very much, John.

August 19, 2016 at 3:31 PM

Well done Afzal, good luck in the contest...

August 19, 2016 at 8:19 PM

Thank you very much, Charlie.

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