Envy

golden amber leaves
adorn the tallest trees now
an early sneak peek
of what is to come so soon
when all the others will blush

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/11/2014 6:07:00 PM
this is awesome, Daniel. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Daniel Human
Date: 10/12/2014 9:48:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea! Daniel.
Date: 10/10/2014 7:42:00 PM
Yeh great spin on this theme Daniel, loved it and congrats
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Date: 10/9/2014 8:44:00 PM
Fine write my friend. Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 10/9/2014 5:23:00 PM
Beautiful, Daniel. Perfect form for what you had to say. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/9/2014 12:21:00 PM
beautiful imagery, congrats on your win in my contest
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Daniel Human
Date: 10/12/2014 9:47:00 AM
Thank you, Francine, much appreciated. Daniel.
Date: 10/9/2014 11:41:00 AM
what a great tanka, Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/9/2014 6:22:00 AM
- A lovely 4 st place, Daniel - Congrats with your winning poem in the contest: "Autumn Colours" - The summer is over, it disappeared just as quickly as it came :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/9/2014 4:18:00 AM
many congrats I love the imagery in this delightful tanka:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/7/2014 11:29:00 AM
was this the one for the contest, or a different one? I really like it, and that last line makes me picture the leaves turning red...these short, restrictive forms aren't really my strong point as I'm a free verser by nature
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Daniel Human
Date: 9/7/2014 2:46:00 PM
A different one. I had to up my game when I read yours. :) I am trying all styles for contests, and loving it.
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