Black Eyed Susan Poet Haiku

Environmental Muggers On the Loose

Just in: Reported 
Thefts of fresh air leave victims  
Of B.O. gagging!


9/16/11

Received 3d place in "Make Me Laugh" contest
Received 5th place in "any Haiku will do" contest

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Gwendolen Song October 12, 2011 at 11:54 AM Cool haiku--humor will win with me EVERY TIME! Never thot of using acronyms in a haiku! Gwendolen

Carol Sunshine Brown September 24, 2011 at 6:29 PM Congrats on your win in Nancy's "Make Me Laugh" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick September 23, 2011 at 2:48 PM Congrats on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich September 22, 2011 at 1:57 AM wow, Susan, you scored BIG with this one Way to go, my friend and I hope you are recovering well?? Luv, Andrea

Nancy Jones September 21, 2011 at 8:36 PM Awesome, Susan... hard to stretch this form successfully in this direction.. preesh muchly your takin' the time.~N

George Aul September 21, 2011 at 3:23 PM Congrats on your win.........George

Carol Sunshine Brown September 21, 2011 at 2:47 PM Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Any Haiku Will Do" Susan. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich September 19, 2011 at 12:35 AM oh, so this was for Irma's contest (PD) She loves this kind of thing, Susan . congratulations, you chose your haiku entry well. soupmail

Fabiyas M V September 18, 2011 at 12:09 PM An exceptional haiku,Susan.Many congratulations!

Constance La France September 18, 2011 at 11:30 AM aaah, so true, the burning of leaves havenot started here yet, but it is coming for sure.. a wonderful win, congrats and thanks for your ever comments and congrats on my poetry~~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 18, 2011 at 9:23 AM CONGRATS SUSAN ON YOUR WWONDERFUL WIN LUV..

David Williams September 18, 2011 at 6:16 AM Susan congrats on your win, very funny..David

Poet Destroyer A September 18, 2011 at 3:47 AM Susan, . a nice congratulations on your Haiku win, ;-). Thank you so much for entering and sharing your poem.Thanks for supporting my contest,, God bless,... LINDA

Andrea Dietrich September 18, 2011 at 1:23 AM A good one for a chuckle, Susan, I sure do love your humor!

Kim Merryman September 16, 2011 at 8:45 PM Ha! Ha! Funny. Kim

Sara Kendrick September 16, 2011 at 5:39 PM Cute one..Got a chuckle...Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Prince Ekpemandu September 16, 2011 at 4:39 PM OKAY...nice one