Enveloped Dreamscape

In the quiet, the night to focus on Dreams escape my head bringing dusty eyes I follow its lonely steps to darkness The moon begins to shine, starts to revise Fog envelopes me holding me so tight I can’t breathe, suffocating, I don't lie… End of life forms before me, true as night I finally suck in breath of the sky Calmness enters my troubled head for once Fog starts to recede, I see a home there Is it mine, what is the purpose of this My dreams, so lost, am I truly aware Where am I to be in this dream, fancy I delve into the space under this moon Bewilderment occupies my shaved head Smooth as silk, I follow nothing so soon The fog starts to cast its way in again I’m blinded only by the moon’s blue light Now I must sit, I am tired, can’t go on I hear the ocean, is it a new sight I wake to the sound of my noise maker To see thick fog covering everything Every thought is clear, I can concentrate I blame it on my dream, ventured seeing Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/8/2014 8:10:00 PM
the fog makes it surreal, Russell! For the dream contest? That was cute where you said: bewilderment occupies my shaved head!
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Date: 2/8/2014 12:24:00 PM
Another well-written piece with fanciful descriptiveness and rhyming.
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Date: 2/8/2014 10:39:00 AM
This is so descriptive. It captured my attention the whole time..well done Richard
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Date: 2/8/2014 10:31:00 AM
such a vivid scene made more impressive through your imaginative lines, russell... captivating work!.. yes, check the emma contest!.. hugggs
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Date: 2/8/2014 6:59:00 AM
Dramatic work..Very expressive and emotive..Reads like a winner if for a contest..We like the fog..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are valuable to me..Sara
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Date: 2/8/2014 1:17:00 AM
Coming events sometimes cast their shadows before. Great quatrain with superb narrative prowess, I really enjoyed it. Kudos ,good Russell .
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