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Enveloped

Dragging their shadow A battalion of white clouds Overtakes the Sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 8/10/2009 1:23:00 AM
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Hi Terry, Congratulations on placing in this contest. I can certainly see why. Your Haiku is wonderful. Lovingly, DAS-J PS sorry to be so late commenting...I've been recovering files... and there's still more to go.
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Bill Doggett
Date: 8/5/2009 6:02:00 PM
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Well said Terry, congratulations, Bill
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Brandee Augustus
Date: 8/3/2009 1:32:00 PM
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I love the title of your haiku. Your poem is very powerful and it could stand on its own without knowing what type of poem it is. Congratulations on your win! It was well deserved!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/31/2009 10:05:00 AM
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I love this Haiku. Very descriptive and expressive. Thanks for your comments on my Haiku. Sara
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Sue Mason
Date: 7/27/2009 1:31:00 PM
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Very clever write here, Terry. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest! I look forward to reading more of your writing.
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 7/27/2009 12:42:00 PM
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Terry, congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Love, Carol
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Cecil Hickman
Date: 7/26/2009 1:32:00 PM
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a very descriptive piece which flows great,,congratulations on winning,,,blessings..Cecil
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 7/25/2009 12:50:00 PM
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love the expansive style of this winning haiku! Terry! congrats! jimbo
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Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 7/25/2009 10:12:00 AM
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Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest Terry. ~Trudy~
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Joyce Johnson
Date: 7/25/2009 8:21:00 AM
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I like this very much. Congratulations. Joyce
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Raul Moreno
Date: 7/25/2009 2:00:00 AM
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Terry, congrats on placing third...Raul
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Date: 7/12/2009 1:06:00 PM
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Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Good use of personification. Keep on writing! Karen
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Adeleke Adeite
Date: 7/12/2009 8:13:00 AM
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Hey this is creative, painting nature. I love each line. What a great piece! You are great, please keep writing...sharing your mind. Adeleke
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Carrie Richards
Date: 7/12/2009 8:08:00 AM
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I love that first line...dragging their shadow...Nicely done!! ~ Carrie
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Jim Wilson
Date: 7/12/2009 7:36:00 AM
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Terry, this is great. Thanks.
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