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Entwined

I can't promise to understand the ways of the mind and the ways we're entwined with the people we love There's a vine, so divine It is there, if we want it~ It extends far beyond what we've known There are people who claim they can talk to the dead Who have climbed through the haze to find them~ There are people we've loved who are no longer here but they still warm our hearts, from above They carry our burdens, and lighten our loads They soften our sorrows, and straighten our roads There are people we've loved who are no longer here who will help us see brighter tomorrows~ Some things are entwined, but they can't be explained, yet proven times over, again We are woven in life by the strongest of vines It is made out of love that has grown It can climb to the stars where our loved ones have gone~ Not a thing that you say can deny it away You may scoff, and not hear what I say But a vine made of love from my heart to the stars is the one that I'll climb…..when I go~ ________________________________________________________________ 2//13/16 Contest: "Entwined" Sponsored by Broken Wings

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Date: 2/23/2016 11:44:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations on your Entwined win... XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/23/2016 9:39:00 AM
Lovely write Carrie.
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Date: 2/23/2016 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Lovely and well written.
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Date: 2/23/2016 12:38:00 AM
how beautiful are your thoughts and images, carrie... my best congrats to you on your shininf win!..huggs
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Date: 2/22/2016 10:09:00 PM
Congrats on great win with this superb verse Carrie..
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Date: 2/22/2016 6:54:00 PM
Carrie, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*
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Date: 2/14/2016 6:48:00 PM
Beautiful, Carrie. As always, you touch the very soul. Elaine
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Date: 2/13/2016 10:50:00 PM
A very lovely poem here, where each line is beautifully expressed with exquisite meter and rhyme. I enjoyed this very much, Carrie :)
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