Entwined

Entwined


Buried it!
Deep in denial’s tomb
it grew, weed like,
nurturing its hate,
feeding its neediness
at the expense
of withering flowers.

Tortured tentacles
laced themselves angrily
about truth,
entwined themselves
in the falsity
of failure,
spreading a pall
upon success.

Suffocating fear
attended the loneliness
grasping attempts
at feigned freedom
in strangling defeat.

Release, escape,
abetted
soft petals
entwined
in the gentle touch
of a hand
offering help.


2/12/2016

submitted to Entwined – Poetry contest
sponsor – Broken Wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gentry Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 7:14 AM
Congratulations on your win with this sad verse with excellent ending!
Scars Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 11:57 AM
John, congrats on your placement in the contest!-luloo *Smiles*
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February 23, 2016 at 11:46 AM
John, Congratulations on your Entwined win... XOX ~LINDA~
Inman Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 10:50 AM
Intense John! Well written.
Onclaud Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 12:48 AM
special congrats on your win, john, and huggs
A. Sharma Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 10:21 PM
Congrats on great win with this superb verse John.
Manassian Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 6:03 PM
loved the ending....from angst to affection. Lovely
Lawless Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 6:43 AM
Yeah, Eileen, my 14 month old granddaughter can erase everything with one smile.
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