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Entwine Me

I am a mere limb of Your Tree Let all your Love entwine me.

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/17/2010 8:13:00 PM

I love this one Debbie. So glad you won with it. Congratulations!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/11/2010 5:09:00 AM

Congratulations on placing in Brian’s “A couple of Lines” contest with these LIFE lines. Smiles, Dane Ann

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2010 4:43:00 AM

Congratulations Deb on your win in Brian Strand's contest "A Couple Of Lines". Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/5/2010 1:37:00 PM

Lovelly lines and prayer. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2010 1:19:00 PM

Hey, this is awesome. Congrats, Deb. Luv, Andrea

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/5/2010 10:46:00 AM

just incredible image! Deb! and thank you for honoring me with placement in your fireworks contest...I went back and forth on whether I should large-case the word 'Nam' ...since you specifically noted not to..but I had to think you meant not to begin lines and such LG. CS. ...so I went ahead w/my instinct and respected Vietnam! (I'm long-winded, I know!) jimbo

Elaine George

Date: 7/5/2010 8:38:00 AM

Wow!!! Such a spiritual epigram, dear Deb. Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's contest. Love, Lainie

John Freeman

Date: 7/4/2010 5:44:00 PM

Yes, how can the form, formed say, why was I formed thus? Congratulations, Deborah on your success. Agape, Moses

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 7/4/2010 12:38:00 PM

Beautiful invitation to love...Congrats, Iolanda

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 7/4/2010 10:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your HM. A lovely couplet ~ Sharon :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/4/2010 10:50:00 AM

Congrats TEACH on your HM in Brian's contest with this wonderful and remarkable write and honor to enjoy as we all celebrate freedom weekend.. good luck with your own contest .. pupil AlohA...with luv

Oleg Borisov

Date: 9/9/2009 1:18:00 PM

Beautifully and erotically. Like it.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/3/2009 4:58:00 PM

Robert will love this, Deborah! He has such a spiritual nature and this is an uplifting verse. Best Wishes, Carolyn

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/3/2009 6:28:00 AM

I agree! this is really a gorgeous poem! well done! Deb!,,,thanks for your comments...soup-mail!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/3/2009 3:35:00 AM

Beautiful. I think Robert will love this Deborah. You have SoupMail. Love, Carol

K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 9/2/2009 3:57:00 PM

Are you serious? Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 9/2/2009 8:51:00 AM

THANKS FOR YOUR KIND COMMENTS.... I AM A YOUNG POET and my poem 'my soup mothers is just to appreciate some of those whohave helped me since i joined the soup. i will try to enter your contest. it is a challenge to me. thanks. Adeleke

Lord R. E. Taylor

Date: 9/2/2009 8:47:00 AM

Deborah, that is truly beautiful. I wish that my love would be permitted to entwine you. Thank you...this is going in my faves! Love Rob