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Choral music heard from afar. A harmonic response to an inner voice Through the distance, I see the sunrise. A primal cord takes life. Knowing that this is a maze within; is it more than I can deal with? The story of life will soon be told. A structure that will liberate us all; that of mother and child entwined cast from the empty Ash of time. A plea for life from those long lost. Those victims of pyroclastic flow, which strike the heart and touch the chord values and comforts of life; are a new sunset. Horizons from afar see the nightfall. Beauty with no disguise brings smiles of sunshine. Amazing grace life now has. The twilight soothes. The end of each day brings rebirth. Renaissance transformed on Earth with unity in work. Life interweaves to reconstruct. We work in the fields. Bring life from dead soil. We gaze at the heavens and wonder what life would be like. Would there be as much strife if we lived on a world in Orion? A status thus formed that brings liberation to our world. We stand amongst the saved embracing a salubrious aura! ___________________________________________________/ Sponsor: Jared Pickett Contest Name: Collaboration Collaborators: Verlena S. Walker and Douglas Dicketts Entry Date: March 09, 2014

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Date: 4/16/2014 1:25:00 PM
A beautiful piece of poetry that carries with it a positive message of hope. Well done to you both! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats. :)
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/17/2014 1:12:00 AM
Thanks Kelly... Verlena
Date: 4/16/2014 5:20:00 AM
Congratulations to you both on this wonderful collab xx
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/16/2014 5:25:00 AM
Thanks Mandy... Verlena
Date: 4/15/2014 4:43:00 PM
Congrad's on your collaboration winning. Light & Love
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/15/2014 4:46:00 PM
Thanks Debbie... Verlena
Date: 4/15/2014 12:40:00 PM
beautiful blend of life and death well told.. sweet congrats, verlena and douglas
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/15/2014 12:57:00 PM
Thanks Nette.... Verlena
Date: 4/15/2014 10:50:00 AM
Dear Verlena and Douglas, I was mesmerized by the intensity of this poem. The focus on death and rebirth is brilliantly conveyed. Throughout our lives we try to "Bring life from dead soil." Wow! Great work. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, carolyn
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/15/2014 11:19:00 AM
Thanks Carolyn... Verlena
Date: 4/15/2014 10:32:00 AM
Brilliantly collaborated poem. Congrats on the win, verlena
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/15/2014 11:20:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Ram... Verlena
Date: 4/15/2014 10:01:00 AM
Very pleasurable read; congrats to you both on a fine win. // paul
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/15/2014 11:20:00 AM
Thanks Paul... Verlena
Date: 4/15/2014 9:22:00 AM
Congratulations both, very nice poem to read....Seren
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/15/2014 11:21:00 AM
Thanks Seren. Verlena
Date: 3/9/2014 8:42:00 PM
fascinating piece you have penned here..best wishes in the contest to you both...luv,Deb
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/9/2014 8:48:00 PM
Thanks Deb.. Verlena

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