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Date written: 10/28/2024
we both knew you had me at first glance. weak in an instant was I, then... I collapsed and shattered into you. Irresistible charms galore ooze out your pores, glowing thousands of lumens in your eyes. They gazed into mine, trapped, I saw no escape. I knew, we both did, that you had me.

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Date: 10/18/2024 7:39:00 PM
Love this. So romantic, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/19/2024 7:42:00 AM
Thank you very much, Andrea:-) I'm glad you did, my friend.

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