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Entranced

From inside looking out my hourglass
I watched as nature painted winter's grass
Entranced from listening to her rhythmic rune
One April watercolor afternoon.

          by Daniel Turner
  Taken from "Watercolor Afternoon"

Copyright © Daniel Turner | Year Posted 2020

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Lisa Ricci Date: 3/1/2023 3:01:00 PM Hello Daniel. I turned to this entry at random. It is lovely and very much poetry. The imagery stands out thus entranced indeed. This little gem is one that must be read out lout with emphasis and feeling. It was an honor turning to your page. Have a wonderful night. Keep enjoying poetrysoup. (smile) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/27/2020 10:39:00 AM can't seem to find a poem of yours I have not read, Maybe way in the back somewhere? Anyway, as I read this again, I was really impressed by the final line. It's SO pretty. Login to Reply

Anna Hopper Date: 9/12/2020 10:05:00 AM Just delightful Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 7/31/2020 6:53:00 AM Hi Daniel, missing your lovely poetry, hope you are keeping well:) Login to Reply

Bette Bavington Date: 7/17/2020 9:26:00 AM Just checking in to say hi. I hope all is well with you. Login to Reply

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 7/10/2020 5:20:00 PM Hello Daniel Turner, i like the way you set the scene of this poem. Enjoyyour evening my friend. Login to Reply

Anna Hopper Date: 6/25/2020 3:10:00 PM You haven’t added anything new! I thought I would visit this lovely poem again. Hope all is well! On the lookout for more works of art! Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/21/2020 1:02:00 PM I stopped by to wish you happy Father’s Day today my dear friend. I hope you are well please let me hear from you soon. Blessings and Aloha, Connie xxoo Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/7/2020 9:04:00 AM This is pretty. ;0) Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 5/24/2020 1:17:00 PM Belated congratulations Daniel. I hope you are well? I haven’t heard from you for a few months. Blessings Connie xxoo Login to Reply

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 5/24/2020 12:04:00 PM Hello Daniel Turner.I loved the second line. I hope all is well with you.Enjoy your day my friend. Login to Reply

Jerry T Curtis Date: 5/21/2020 8:02:00 PM Short and sweet, that's the way I like it. Great Job Dan Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 5/11/2020 1:11:00 AM Loved the build up to that last line. Sweet. Nature deserves a captive audience. Login to Reply

Bette Bavington Date: 4/24/2020 6:37:00 AM Hello. I hope this visit finds you well. Great poem. How awesome that you live in a glass house and that your windows are so clean to be looking out to see things so keen. I am lucky if I get to my windows once a year. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/18/2020 10:44:00 AM As I read this again on the winners list, Gorgeous came to my mind. I dropped way down and read that gorgeous was the word I used the very first time I had seen it. Very well deserved win. Congratulations, Danny. Hope all is well for you. Login to Reply

John Watt Date: 4/18/2020 8:44:00 AM Daniel, your April watercolor afternoon is an enchanting glimpse at nature's beauty. Well done and congrats in Greg's contest! Login to Reply

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 4/18/2020 8:28:00 AM Congratulations on your well-deserved 5th place in the Rithimus Divisa Poetry Contest, Daniel - this was a VERY close contest, with so many wonderful writes - blessings! :o) Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 4/3/2020 4:17:00 PM Lovely write, Daniel, very cheerful and colorful. I hope you are doing well? I am doing great. Isolation hasn't really been no big deal since Roper passed, because I chose to lock myself away from everyone. Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 4/1/2020 2:06:00 PM what a beautiful piece Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 3/25/2020 2:38:00 PM Hi Daniel, this is a wonderful piece of poetry, as your work always is. A poetic gem that does paint such vivid images in my mind. A beautiful write, my friend. Your pen does still run gold. Stay safe. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....Mike. Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 3/23/2020 2:19:00 AM Love this Daniel. Reminds me of my back yard right now. Little bits of green peeking out from under the snow. God Bless, JB Login to Reply

Charlie Smith Date: 3/20/2020 3:56:00 PM Real nice, Old Timer... Login to Reply

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 3/19/2020 5:55:00 AM Reminds me of Simon and Garfunkel. Well written. I am starting my day with this poem. Kind wishes, Kai Login to Reply

CayCay Jennings Date: 3/18/2020 10:32:00 AM Your already talented self got even more smooth, me thinks, during 'our' silent period. This piece led to that thought but how can Daniel-awesomeness multiple itself? Contest or no, this is a stand=alone beauty! Poetry hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/9/2020 6:59:00 PM ohh so pretty. I love that last line of watercolor afternoon, Danny Login to Reply

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