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From inside looking out my hourglass I watched as nature painted winter's grass Entranced from listening to her rhythmic rune One April watercolor afternoon. by Daniel Turner Taken from "Watercolor Afternoon"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 9/27/2020 10:39:00 AM
can't seem to find a poem of yours I have not read, Maybe way in the back somewhere? Anyway, as I read this again, I was really impressed by the final line. It's SO pretty.
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Date: 9/12/2020 10:05:00 AM
Just delightful
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Date: 7/31/2020 6:53:00 AM
Hi Daniel, missing your lovely poetry, hope you are keeping well:)
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Date: 7/17/2020 9:26:00 AM
Just checking in to say hi. I hope all is well with you.
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Date: 7/10/2020 5:20:00 PM
Hello Daniel Turner, i like the way you set the scene of this poem. Enjoyyour evening my friend.
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Date: 6/25/2020 3:10:00 PM
You haven’t added anything new! I thought I would visit this lovely poem again. Hope all is well! On the lookout for more works of art!
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Date: 6/21/2020 1:02:00 PM
I stopped by to wish you happy Father’s Day today my dear friend. I hope you are well please let me hear from you soon. Blessings and Aloha, Connie xxoo
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Date: 6/7/2020 9:04:00 AM
This is pretty. ;0)
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Date: 5/24/2020 1:17:00 PM
Belated congratulations Daniel. I hope you are well? I haven’t heard from you for a few months. Blessings Connie xxoo
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Date: 5/24/2020 12:04:00 PM
Hello Daniel Turner.I loved the second line. I hope all is well with you.Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 5/21/2020 8:02:00 PM
Short and sweet, that's the way I like it. Great Job Dan
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Date: 5/11/2020 1:11:00 AM
Loved the build up to that last line. Sweet. Nature deserves a captive audience.
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Date: 4/24/2020 6:37:00 AM
Hello. I hope this visit finds you well. Great poem. How awesome that you live in a glass house and that your windows are so clean to be looking out to see things so keen. I am lucky if I get to my windows once a year.
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Date: 4/18/2020 10:44:00 AM
As I read this again on the winners list, Gorgeous came to my mind. I dropped way down and read that gorgeous was the word I used the very first time I had seen it. Very well deserved win. Congratulations, Danny. Hope all is well for you.
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Date: 4/18/2020 8:44:00 AM
Daniel, your April watercolor afternoon is an enchanting glimpse at nature's beauty. Well done and congrats in Greg's contest!
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Date: 4/18/2020 8:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved 5th place in the Rithimus Divisa Poetry Contest, Daniel - this was a VERY close contest, with so many wonderful writes - blessings! :o)
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Date: 4/3/2020 4:17:00 PM
Lovely write, Daniel, very cheerful and colorful. I hope you are doing well? I am doing great. Isolation hasn't really been no big deal since Roper passed, because I chose to lock myself away from everyone.
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Date: 4/1/2020 2:06:00 PM
what a beautiful piece
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Date: 3/25/2020 2:38:00 PM
Hi Daniel, this is a wonderful piece of poetry, as your work always is. A poetic gem that does paint such vivid images in my mind. A beautiful write, my friend. Your pen does still run gold. Stay safe. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 3/23/2020 2:19:00 AM
Love this Daniel. Reminds me of my back yard right now. Little bits of green peeking out from under the snow. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/20/2020 3:56:00 PM
Real nice, Old Timer...
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Date: 3/19/2020 5:55:00 AM
Reminds me of Simon and Garfunkel. Well written. I am starting my day with this poem. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 3/18/2020 10:32:00 AM
Your already talented self got even more smooth, me thinks, during 'our' silent period. This piece led to that thought but how can Daniel-awesomeness multiple itself? Contest or no, this is a stand=alone beauty! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 3/9/2020 6:59:00 PM
ohh so pretty. I love that last line of watercolor afternoon, Danny
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Date: 3/9/2020 12:11:00 AM
Danny, if I could only write like this transforming beautiful thoughts into words the way you do with such finesse! Simply wonderful, my friend! Bravo! Pandita
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