Entombed Fragments of Life

"Fragments and crumbs of life, all the little pieces" John Ruskin, 1853

. alone all … leaving the other against rough rocks, a boat within, crashed but the turbulent, purple lips. their becalmed on wearing an enticing smile that were bubbling up, They drifted abreast in waters to this rickety boat. was a welcome sight looking for alliance to reach a haven Another boat drifting equally alone hissed his pains and desires. boat that nor did they feel the pains of this rickety and soaked their rough, coarse feet; them that danced around rocks that felt no warmth of waves around craggy rocks, cold, rough rocks: in stormy high seas, was drifting A rickety boat, blown by a storm
Here lies a single piece, a disfigured fragment, of his voyage in the vast sea of life. Aug. 25, 2020 *A 4th Place* in Constance La France's contest "All the Little Pieces" judged on Sept. 3, 2020
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La France Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 2:50 AM
Newton, congratulations on your win in my challenge All The Little Pieces with this wonderful write _Constance
Ranaweera  Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 10:43 AM
Thank you so much, Constance, for considering a placement for this piece in your contest!!
Andresen Avatar
September 4, 2020 at 10:54 AM
- Back to congratulate you on your win, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ranaweera  Avatar
September 4, 2020 at 11:08 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise!!
Ermine Avatar
September 3, 2020 at 4:48 PM
Hey, Newton. Perfectly poetic. Great analogy for life! Congratulations on your Win. I'm kind of itching for gorey details, I throw poetic out the door for these contests, very classless. Perhaps the boat picture was drawn from specific event or a life spent with boats. It's a great poem, very striking read.
Ranaweera  Avatar
September 3, 2020 at 5:12 PM
Thank you so much, Sigrid, for your close read and the great comment!! Additionally, no personal experiences as such, yet all happened in my imagination!
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 3:24 AM
- Lively and great written ... could feel fear on the rough sea, Newton ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ranaweera  Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 3:46 AM
Thank you so much, Sunshine Smile, for this lovely comment and the best wishes!!
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