Entombed

Spelunking in an uncharted cave, the earth shakes; my flashlight shuts down and I feel my way through a tactile ebony darkness. A chill seeps into my bones; sending a shiver up my spine as scary thoughts occupy my mind. And an emptiness hollows out my soul, cutting, my anchor line to reality. Fear drips from my pores; pooling in my heart where hope drowns. Feeling forsaken, and abandoned to my fate; solitude is oppressive and all-consuming. I'm trapped; entombed in the bowels of a collapsed cave, and my heart cries out for the faintest glimmer of light. Plagued by fear and anxieties I sense evil lurking in the ebon shadows; instantly paralyzing reason. And I feel strangled; as an oppressive blackness, chokes me; leaving me gasping, while I slowly run out of air.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 11:33 PM
Back with congrats, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 9:28 AM
Thanks Line, your comments and support are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 3:56 PM
Chilling imagery. Superbly done, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Thanks so much Line, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Ashley Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 9:40 PM
I could feel the terror of your intriguing and deep write vibrantly expressed. Your poem strikes at the heart of our primal fear of the dark, oh, and of being buried alive! Terrifying and excellent. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
Pinet Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 8:29 AM
Thanks Susan, your comments and support are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 6:12 PM
Well expressed Emile. Congrats on your fine win.
Pinet Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 8:28 AM
Thanks Richard, it's always nice to hear from you my friend, Emile.
Krampe Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 2:21 PM
Very vivid, dark description. Congrats on your win, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 8:27 AM
Thanks Agnes, your comments and support are always welcome my friend, Emile.
A  Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 10:36 AM
Hello Emile, :) Congrats on your win, thank you for entering my contest. HUGS **SKAT**
Pinet Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 11:46 AM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate your including my work as a winner in your contest my friend, Emile.
Barden Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 8:54 PM
Dark and deep - just my thing, Emile, and this is beautiful and heart-wrenching! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - I love to see dark poems getting exposure! :-)
Pinet Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 9:25 AM
Thanks Gregory, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 9:36 AM
Emile, deep and dark , my fav, CONGRATULATIONS on your win !
Pinet Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 9:50 AM
Thanks Broken, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 11:52 AM
- A dark and cruel feeling, Emile - Great written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pinet Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 1:55 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I think we are all a little scared of the dark, your comments are welcome my friend, Emile.
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