Entombed

Spelunking in the bowels of a cave, the earth shakes; my flashlight shuts down and I feel my way through a tactile ebony darkness. A chill seeps into my bones; sending a shiver up my spine as scary thoughts occupy my mind. And an emptiness hollows out my soul; cutting loose, my anchor to reality. Fear drips from my sweaty pores; pooling in my heart where hope drowns. Feeling forsaken and abandoned to my tears; solitude is oppressive and all-consuming. I'm trapped, entombed in a collapsed cave; and my heart cries out for the faintest glimmer of light. Plagued by my imagination; I sense the face of evil lurking in the shape-shifting shadows; instantly paralyzing reason. I feel strangled; as an oppressive blackness crushes me, and I faint into oblivion.

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Date: 4/16/2018 11:33:00 PM
Back with congrats, Emile.
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Date: 4/17/2018 9:28:00 AM
Thanks Line, your comments and support are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/16/2018 3:56:00 PM
Chilling imagery. Superbly done, Emile.
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Date: 3/17/2018 9:35:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/22/2018 9:40:00 PM
I could feel the terror of your intriguing and deep write vibrantly expressed. Your poem strikes at the heart of our primal fear of the dark, oh, and of being buried alive! Terrifying and excellent. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/23/2018 8:29:00 AM
Thanks Susan, your comments and support are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/22/2018 6:12:00 PM
Well expressed Emile. Congrats on your fine win.
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Date: 1/23/2018 8:28:00 AM
Thanks Richard, it's always nice to hear from you my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/22/2018 2:21:00 PM
Very vivid, dark description. Congrats on your win, Emile.
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Date: 1/23/2018 8:27:00 AM
Thanks Agnes, your comments and support are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/22/2018 10:36:00 AM
Hello Emile, :) Congrats on your win, thank you for entering my contest. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 1/22/2018 11:46:00 AM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate your including my work as a winner in your contest my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/1/2017 8:54:00 PM
Dark and deep - just my thing, Emile, and this is beautiful and heart-wrenching! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - I love to see dark poems getting exposure! :-)
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Date: 10/2/2017 9:25:00 AM
Thanks Gregory, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/28/2017 9:36:00 AM
Emile, deep and dark , my fav, CONGRATULATIONS on your win !
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Date: 9/28/2017 9:50:00 AM
Thanks Broken, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/27/2017 11:52:00 AM
- A dark and cruel feeling, Emile - Great written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/27/2017 1:55:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I think we are all a little scared of the dark, your comments are welcome my friend, Emile.
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