Enticing

You entice me sun 
with the brightness of your rays 
to come on outside
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February 3, 2024 at 11:11 PM
I like the uplifting feel of going outside on a sunny day, enticed by the sun. Nice Haiku, Karen. Have a nice Sunday, my friend. Bill
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February 4, 2024 at 7:03 PM
Thank you, you as well
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