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Enticed To Elation

A place of branches revealing an empty day after a long rainy day a time comes and goes radiating golden light on the window sill and a radiant downpour and raindrops hit the window pane akin to timorous wings then all is still stones are crooned to sleep with the quiet sound of rain slowly subsiding and cradled in the branches deep in bowels of earth among the bright buds a slumbering silence reigns It has bitter incidents forced breakthroughs moments of disconnection can also be glorious experience in the spotlight however we have been blessed to be able to leave this world in a hurry to breathe to live to love to forget to forgive to work to start a fresh day with a recent toil & be a muse to convey a smile to somebody's face embrace this journey halcyon destinations are ready to sprinkle sparkles & to lighten your ways with shining stars
Written: March 28, 2023 A Brian Strand Premiere No 1204 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand
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George Avatar
March 31, 2023 at 9:27 AM
Amazing dear friend ! Your creativity and poetic prowess are simply awe inspiring ! Kudos....
Kendrick Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 9:12 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Very descriptive and expressive work. We all have feelings about the rain in excess. I remember when once the whole world flooded. I was hoping I would see a rainbow but alas I did not. Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 9:02 AM
WOW!!! A wonderful write/picture. Now have a wonderful day....................
Pandit Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 6:02 AM
Wonderful exploration of life in this creative write my friend. A FAVE from me for your originality of thoughts. Hope you BIG as always in Brian's contest.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 5:17 AM
A symphony of beauty sung melodically in every line, my dear friend, Lasaad! Beautifully done!
Sangster - K Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 5:05 AM
An enjoyable read for me this morning. Enjoy your day my friend :-)
Rolland Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 4:19 AM
wonderful to be read again, and again, such enlightment and grace here, yann
Buhagiar Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 1:15 AM
Brilliant shape and ideas.
Daniel Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 1:00 AM
This is a stunning specimen of your expertise, Sotto, a sure winner:) so many beautiful lines:)
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