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We feel the lift engage, elevating our gondola high above the valley. And as snowflakes tumble from a teal sky our adventurous ski trip has begun. The allure of a ski lodge in the Alps is that it's so profoundly romantic. For when brisk breezes begin to cool down we’ll go inside and toast marshmallows. Together, we’ll watch a scarlet sunset as it lights the snow capped mountains on fire. And trillions of stars will start to twinkle like diamonds strewn across ebony. We’ll be as angels on top of the world nothing comes close to that kind of feeling. And we’ll explore our new found paradise with the enthusiasm of newlyweds. (Blank Verse) Oct. 12, 2018

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Date: 10/16/2018 6:03:00 AM
You've painted an awesome vacation, Emile.
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Date: 10/15/2018 6:45:00 PM
Emile, so romantic and wonderfully penned, well done ~
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Date: 10/12/2018 9:14:00 PM
Just a long heartfelt AWWWWWW. Your imagery is so pronouncedly wonderful, Emile. I am re-reading it, and savoring it. You are such a romantic! This always shines through.
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Date: 10/13/2018 7:34:00 AM
Thanks so much Caren, I appreciate your wonderful comments my friend, Emile.