Enthralled by those Eyes

Wow a well deserved win loveeeee this hey my blue dazzling eyes 👀are dancing at da Empress of fine ink 👀✍️❤️‍🩹😘 and I gotta fav my blue eyes 😉🧜‍♀️🦄🧜‍♀️🦄🧜‍♀️🦄🧜‍♀️🦄

Congrats, Sweetie. Very well deserved

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Inky, what wonderful contrasts in your words - burning sapphire, "delirious blues " - they create a sense of a fever washing over you, a fever that you "willingly" draw to you! This is wonderfully crafted! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings of blue serenity to you, dear friend. Samzy

IE, I enjoyed reading this love poem as blue represents different things to many of us. It makes me just smile because blue can also refer to sadness. It all depends on context and what you've done here is lovely...it also just makes me think. Lately, I have been listening to Song Sung Blue by Neil Diamond as an obsession. It makes me laugh. In any case, I have to run now....but I shall be back to read more of your wonderful writing!!! Smiles!!!

beautiful Dodoitsu

Goshhh! How breathtaking is this dodoitsu! Even in just four outstanding lines you've layered such textured imagery and painted an artistic masterpiece omg I'm speechless.. those soothing waves of love, drifting in its magic, and especially that opening line is absolutely stunning "Your sapphire sighs stirred my heart" and also "delirious blues" ! Ahhh I'm all enthralled and engrossed in the opulent blues that you've hued.. blue eyes described ever so enchantingly! I'm mesmerised 😍😍🌊🌊💫💫 Sending you mermaid magic and soothing starbeams and moonlight all acrosssss ~ ✨🧜‍♀️🧚‍♀️🌙🧚‍♀️🧜‍♀️✨ A FAVE !!!

Hi Ink, You write with consummate brilliance in forms long or short. This work is beyond spectacular in every respect. Within this piece is stunning alliteration and awesome feeling.⭐⭐⭐ Best of luck, Howard

Surrendering to blue hues of love never has led a heart astray, or caused injury that didn't serve a soul's sweat Poetess...there is a shade of blue that only your heart knows, it's vibrant sweet, and will not retreat in the sorrow of night...J.A.B.

Even in a 4 line Dodoitsu you managed Alliteration that makes perfect sense. Enthralling! I’m kinda partial to green or hazel eyes.

Ohhhh I love this, Inky 🌹

Sapphire sighs…delirious blues.. ahhh

Your sapphire sighs stirred my heart, mmmm papi I always strive to stir your throbbing organs aee …and I burn .. yesss papiiii I burrrrn for u tooo aeee… swept by delirious blues, willingly enthralled...mmmm willingly….that a promise … u sexaaay piece of heaven youuuuu… 🔥🔥🔥

Who knew you could bundle such an amazing poem into four lines!! 😀. Burning and sweeping.. 🧹, you’ve gone on such a ride here within these words. Glorious poem, indeed… enjoyed reading; thank you. ☺️