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Enthral

With a great heavy weight Like an elephant breast Placed upon my chest, hurting breaths I enter my sanctuary....rest The weightiness began To lift: morning sounds call Me into world of beauty Then sight and sound enthral The beautiful Bluebird Sitting in the tall Oak Enjoyed just looking at his blue coat The dampness covered, soaked As the Spirit wrapped me In his warm snug arms, love Overtook me, all life's problems Gone, flew way with the Dove

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/24/2010 3:37:00 PM
A spiritual masterpiece.. I am amazed from your blog comment that u have not been writing for eons of years.. u are truly blessed and gifted to write lovely poetry in a short span of time.. I just luv "as the Spirit wrapped me" intense and powerful..thankxxx..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/24/2010 1:43:00 PM
Beautiful poem Sara, what a joy to read >> James
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Date: 2/24/2010 1:13:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL!!!! I love birds, I have my coffee on my porch (built in) cause it's freezing here) I open the windows in and do a few bird calls, the neighbors already know I'm not right haha, I know your use of fowl in this was much enlightened to spiritual yet it made me appreciate them soo much. Many blessings and thanks for the encouragement & well wishes w/ the music! :) Cindy
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Date: 2/24/2010 12:50:00 PM
Oh, what a beautiful poem that soothes my soul, today, Sara. I must thank you for helping my mind take a break from all the many distractions! Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 2/24/2010 10:59:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Sara. Please keep writing and sharing with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2010 10:09:00 AM
Sounds like a productive rest getting you off to a flying start. Thank you for your comment. 33 years of marriage faithful the whole time with no plans to change. However, not blind.
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Date: 2/24/2010 6:21:00 AM
you awake today? did you get phyllis a cake for her b-day? is she coming today.
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Date: 2/24/2010 2:57:00 AM
Really nice images here words so well placed, thanks for your support Daniel
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Date: 2/23/2010 7:19:00 PM
Some contrast in symbolism here...........smile!
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Date: 2/23/2010 5:51:00 PM
a piece that shows a spirit at rest with everything surrounding them after their spirit was aware of the simple beauties we all sometimes miss,,,Beautifully written and Thank you for your comments after taking the time to read,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 2/23/2010 5:05:00 PM
nicely penned, enjoyed reading
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Date: 2/23/2010 4:58:00 PM
MOST DELIGHTFUL. I enjoyed the way you laid our bodies to rest .When we are gone..Very well writen . I love the visual..irma
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