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Written 2/7/2024

Entertaining of Peace

Builder-blocks build with     
Builder-blocks are entertaining
Entertaining for little ones
Entertaining even for adults
Adults get creative
Adults articulate to their children
Children build towers
Children build houses
Houses can be different sizes
Houses can be one color or colorful
Colorful pieces interlock
Colorful endless play
Play creative handcrafted
Play and still learn
Learn to be interacting
Learn social skills
Skills grow and develop
Skills artistic challenges
Challenges to understand them
Challenges in children’s life
Life to figure problems
Life own experience
Experience earning success
Experience own respect
Respect by modeling
Respect amidst friends
Friends from school
Friends that are special forever
Forever be yourself
Forever be spiritually joyful
Joyful fulfillment of oneself
Joyful excitement of love
Love toward someone
Love is the deep heart feeling
Feeling compassion or passion
Feeling angry or sad
Sad and conflicted with thoughts
Sad in streams of tears
Tears echo silence and despair
Tears of happiness
Happiness than never ends
Happiness to the heart
Heart guiding smile
Heart inside sings
Sings to dream
Sings for comfort and peace
Peace of mind
Peace of freedom
Freedom…
Mind…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kendrick Avatar
February 18, 2024 at 4:02 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go! Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
One Avatar
February 17, 2024 at 2:46 PM
Loved your takenon my contest...Very creative and flows really well..Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Anaya Avatar
February 17, 2024 at 12:38 PM
Congratulations on your win! Simple thoughts can be the best thoughts to be penned. A good message as well!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 1:17 PM
I enjoyed reading your creative/wonderful write. Good Luck if for a contest... Have a blessed day writing away....................
Empress Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 12:04 PM
Dear Eve, What a most creative blitz this is! I absolutely loved it and the flow is seamlessly, youv nailed it really and delivered also a very unique theme. I love the lines “ learn social skills” “ tears of happiness” and depth of this too is soulful. Pleasure reading your work. Best wishes if its for the contest. Sending you light always
Andresen Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 7:33 AM
- Very skillfully done, Eve ... I've started several times on this form ... when I'm halfway through I lose the thread :))) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 2:32 AM
Not my favorite form but you did it very well. If for the contest good luck. Hugs.
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