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(1) Approaching with calculated strike, my psyche your aim; you anticipate my demise.
(2) With kind-hearted souls, vulnerability is oft misjudged. Frailty the frock we wear…?
(3) You presume pure passion and palpable tenderness portray a sappy sweetheart. Rather, love’s
(4) blaze ought infer diversified pleasures, boundless paths to endless expression, and intensity for life 
(5) as well as love. The old cliché… and you have assessed poorly, my friend. Thus, your lamentable plight. 
(6) For I am warrior, through and through. This blood courses through veins with same magnitude and 
(7) ferocity as impassioned lover and will not be wasted on you! So, when you come, come prepared 
(8) for every move will be countered, every thrust deflected, all advances refused. Your endeavor to 
(9) unhinge me, drive me mad, even insane will lead to your last breath, defeat, undeniable pain.  
(10) Great risk for ‘tis no match which can be scored. Exists but one conclusion when one lives by the sword…
             
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12/8/19
For If you live by the sword then you die by the sword Poetry Contest
By Silent One

(Note: Though it appears not to have met the 10 line maximum requirement, it was 10 on my word document. I've decided to take a chance by submitting it while I consider reconfiguring this already condensed piece. I numbered each line to show where the line breaks occur ~Thank you so much for your patience :)

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Date: 12/16/2019 5:09:00 PM
Great take on the contest, HT. I like the way you wrote this. Congratulations on your win. Charlie
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Date: 12/18/2019 11:36:00 AM
Thank you so much, Charlie! :)
Date: 12/15/2019 7:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/15/2019 7:20:00 PM
Thank you, Eve :) hugs
Date: 12/15/2019 5:30:00 PM
Well done on getting a winning poem :)~ H.T.
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Date: 12/15/2019 7:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gregory :)
Date: 12/15/2019 4:47:00 PM
Thank you for pointing out the ten lines... this is a very good take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 12/15/2019 7:11:00 PM
Thank you so much for allowing it... And thank you for the inspiration and the placement :)
Date: 12/10/2019 10:09:00 AM
powerful words, driven with the same force as the sword itself...well crafted my friend...:) hugs
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Date: 12/11/2019 11:08:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sandra :) hugs
Date: 12/9/2019 11:05:00 AM
You have "nailed the contest" to this poem if you ask me.
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Date: 12/9/2019 9:46:00 PM
Wow, now that's a totally cool and immensely appreciated comment! Thank you so much, Caren ~ nice to see you!
Date: 12/9/2019 8:27:00 AM
There is a message in this piece that echoes throughout each and every line. Deeply felt as it slices away at those who may wear a false facade, a warning to those who would advance with ill intentions, an end to those who find only shadows a defense. Really well crafted my friend. This should do well in the contest.
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Date: 12/9/2019 9:44:00 PM
Wow, you nailed its meaning, my friend. I really appreciate your taking the time to always dig deep and leave your well thought-out impressions, feedback and encouragement. Thank you so much!
Date: 12/8/2019 6:50:00 PM
These are all verses of passionate wisdom my friend--so much truth and guidance in precious words..superb ending with:Exists but one conclusion when one lives by the sword…a winning poem you wrote, HT.
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Date: 12/9/2019 9:28:00 PM
Vijay, thank you so much for your always kind and encouraging feedback. I really appreciate it...
Date: 12/8/2019 5:07:00 PM
Wonderful entry in the contest. Thanks for sharing and best of luck H.T.
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Date: 12/8/2019 5:18:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gregory. I really appreciate it :)
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