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Enter Bliss

Dulcet red sunset tranquil time__eve This splendor of sunset at day's end With my love next to me in his best Eloqent words he speaks to me now Come away love ride into sunset Leave the world enter bliss he whispers The fragrance of his spicy scent draws me Yet this wafting scent of Wisteria Lingers___beautiful lavender shade Draws me back but his lilting voice speaks Come__Oh! the tranquil sunset pulls me But then the Whip-Poor-Will calls come

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Swairik Das

Date: 5/1/2010 5:59:00 AM

excellent. by the way, wat does this phrase means, ' Whip-Poor-Will'? Love Swairik

Lynette Chachere

Date: 4/14/2010 9:15:00 PM

sunset. it has always been apart of bliss. Hey Sara, he sounds real.I bet he's writing of an eternal bliss with you too. .somewhere in this world.i always knew there was something so deep about you, some of your poetry reveals it...he whispers your name...is tranquility itself.i can imagine your love through the imagery that you write.he is beautiful too. -Always&Forever Lynette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/14/2010 2:52:00 PM

Nice placement of words for the contest Sara and good luck if so entered.. Andrea will certainly have her hands full judging with so many brilliant entries.. yours is surely a winner already..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Mike Butler

Date: 4/14/2010 10:54:00 AM

Great entry for the contest. Good luck! Though you rarely need it. Thanks for your comments. Take care -Mike

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/14/2010 9:34:00 AM

Hello Sara . Thanks for the s.m. Also I read my comments yesterday . No Rain Is not my Daughter . But thanks for the write. But I just read Doris is your Mother . I think . I have enjoyed reading your poetry today . Always P.D.