Enshrined

A soft wind whispers
early September.
The year is passing
and you are closed
for good.

You were more
than brick and mortar—

You had a heart.

Now you rest in shadows
in the downtown.

You still bear the voices
of those who came in
for a burger or a drink
also playing video games
or sports.

I still hold in my heart
how you cared for
the servers working
their way through college.

They were the dearest friends.

But mostly I remember
the Friday nights when
I stood on the dining porch
and you urged me to sing.

I still hear the applause.

I still hold dear the night
when I painted a waterfall
while nursing a drink
in your loft.

O how a blank canvas came to life.

Each morning the sun shines
but your lights are off.
Sparrows dance in the sidewalk
and chatter by the front steps.

But as I drive and take a look
I sing my song for you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Greenhough Avatar
September 17, 2025 at 10:50 AM
This is so sad. I too hate change. I love this poem that is almost an obituary for a shop. It's so unfortunate when good times end.
Godwin Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 3:43 PM
I know this feeling, and you did a beautiful job with each line of imagery relaying it. It's a poignant, melancholy missing feel that hits all should they live long enough. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Wolf Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 9:38 AM
Love the narrative, Mike. So haunting and nostalgic... sentimental, without becoming maudlin. Thanks, Gershon
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