Audrey Haick Poet Kimo

Enraptured Hearts

two hearts enraptured in love exchange vows
star eyes can’t see pass the day
hope indwells lovers’ hearts

ceremonious feast and dance ensues
two souls united in flesh
wedding celebration

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For Dr. Ram's "Wedding is One Special Event in Marriage"

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Dr.Ram Mehta March 29, 2011 at 4:30 AM Thanks for the entry, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire March 22, 2011 at 12:36 PM Oh my gosh, Annalise, I almost wrote the same things about those with stars in their eyes not seeing past the wedding day. Weddings are days of hope and joy, the hardships follow later. Excellent work, dear! Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest. Love, Carolyn

James Fraser March 22, 2011 at 11:28 AM The eventual path of love. For some it remains on track, for some not. This piece will forever stay on track Annalise. A delight to read, and all the very best in Dr. Ram's contest....:)

George Aul March 22, 2011 at 11:06 AM Good luck in the contest....Thanks for the comments.........George

Andrea Dietrich March 21, 2011 at 3:27 PM Good one and I especially liked the second of the two. That celebration can be awesome!

Carrie Richards March 21, 2011 at 3:20 PM So romantic, and beautiful!! Well done, Annalise!!

Nette Onclaud March 21, 2011 at 2:48 PM a poetic treat that's a pleasure to read, anna.. winning wishes as always! :) huggs, nette

Michael J. Falotico March 21, 2011 at 2:12 PM A beautiful piece on a lovely wedding day.. so well done my dear....luv Michael