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Enough of Me Premiere Contest Winner

When I begin to look at life As nothing but an endless strife When the power of faith and hope Fail to help me strive and cope When I lay down my dreams to rest And so give up their mighty quest When love's warm embers cease to burn And make my heart an icy urn When from the grace of God I flee... Then life has had enough of me. September 9, 2014 ~1st Place~ Premiere Contest: Contest No. 225 Sponsor: Brian Strand Judged: 10/18/2016 ~1st Place~ Contest: 10 or Less Lines Sponsor: Rob Carmack Judged: 10/14/2015

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Date: 10/19/2016 5:09:00 PM
Lovely, as always. Congratulations, Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/20/2016 6:37:00 AM
Thank you, Fran, for your visit, lovely comment and congrats. Sandra
Date: 10/19/2016 3:18:00 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your trophy win. A very simple, straightforward, lovely couplet.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/20/2016 6:36:00 AM
Thank you very much, Janis. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/19/2016 2:07:00 PM
Sandra, when you congratulated me on my placement, I was remiss in my reply to you, my mind was elsewhere. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win! I loved the presentation.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/20/2016 6:36:00 AM
Thank you, Brenda! I appreciate your kind comment and congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/19/2016 11:52:00 AM
Congrats, Sandra! Great write!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/20/2016 6:35:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kim. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/19/2016 6:43:00 AM
Dear Sandra, Congratulations on your big win. Excellent write!!!//love, Anu:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/20/2016 6:35:00 AM
Thank you, Anulaxmi, for your kind comment and congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/19/2016 4:24:00 AM
Amazing write my dear friend, Sandra! Congratulations on your well-deserved top win! Hugs and cheers!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/20/2016 6:34:00 AM
Thank you very much, Galeo! Sandra
Date: 12/29/2015 5:22:00 PM
SANDRA, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page during the last week of 2015 and beginning of 2016 :) awesome way to start the year... Enjoy the coming Year.... SKAT
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/29/2015 5:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Skat! Yes, I am grateful for the feature. I wish you and yours a healthy and happy New Year. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/16/2015 9:31:00 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your win. -SKAT-
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Date: 10/16/2015 6:54:00 PM
The meter of this poem appears flawless to me, dear Sandra. Excellent and a big congrats from me :)
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Date: 10/15/2015 8:59:00 PM
Wonderful Sandra...big congrats :)
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Date: 10/15/2015 3:36:00 PM
I love the wonderful message in this poem Sandra. So many keep throwing pity parties for themselves, instead of trying to grow and learn from their harsh experiences. This poem says it all and is excellent! It deserves the top spot. Congratulations Sandra!
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Date: 10/15/2015 1:52:00 PM
a nice little one here, good rhyming, reads very smooth - congrats on your top win!
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Date: 10/15/2015 8:54:00 AM
Lovely poem, Sandra.
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Date: 10/15/2015 7:08:00 AM
Big 7......Congratulations
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Date: 10/15/2015 2:01:00 AM
Congrats on superb win Sandra with this wonderful write!
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Date: 10/14/2015 11:13:00 PM
Wonderfully written. Let's hope none of us find ourselves fleeing from the grace of God. I enjoyed this poem very much. ~ Lin ~
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Date: 10/14/2015 8:49:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/14/2015 8:25:00 PM
CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN MY FRIEND!! "When love's warm embers cease to burn And make my heart an icy urn" LOVE IT...
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Date: 9/9/2014 2:53:00 PM
excellent. i hope your entry rates high in the contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/8/2014 7:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maurice. Sandra

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