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I accidentally let one loose, shoot, it's going to get embarrassing soon. For even though it was merely a toot, it held a stench that oft makes women swoon. At first, it was somewhat tolerable, then without warning, it got hard to breathe. And it soon became intolerable, as tolerant tempers began to seethe. The vile smell was slowly dissipating when I accidentally let one loose. And this nasty one was nauseating, it was about time for me to vamoose! One woman gaged, looking like she might faint, and a man began heaving up his lunch. But loudly voicing a vicious complaint, I deflected fault with a counterpunch. Of all the indignities, I shouted, voicing my anger, enough is enough! And my innocence was never doubted, as I shamelessly stomped off, in a huff! (Quatrain) 7/8/2018

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Date: 7/23/2018 2:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. After all it is just bodily odour. Smells can be very deceptive...Very funny. Kai
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Date: 7/23/2018 8:51:00 AM
Thanks Kal, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/23/2018 12:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Clever and well done! :)
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Date: 7/23/2018 8:50:00 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/22/2018 12:15:00 PM
So very clever indeed! Still laughing! Congratulations on your awesome win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/22/2018 12:40:00 PM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/22/2018 7:21:00 AM
ha ha ha I can picture this so well Emile, many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/22/2018 8:36:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/22/2018 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations Emile, on your win in my contest...I loved this! Enough is enough...lol All the best...Charlie
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Date: 7/22/2018 8:36:00 AM
Thanks Charles, I appreciate your comments and the placement in your contest my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/8/2018 9:16:00 PM
Hi Emile.. Tonight, the mountain sky is clear. In a few hours the stars will tease me with their winks. The twilight is for your poem, and it's as enjoyable as the coming sunset!
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Date: 7/9/2018 7:40:00 AM
Thanks Lyric Man, now I know why they call you the Lyric man...beautiful my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/8/2018 10:20:00 AM
Nasty, Emile. Just the way you intended it.
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Date: 7/8/2018 3:03:00 PM
Thanks Line, as you say...it was no accident...I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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