Kim Rodrigues Poet Haiku

Ennui of Fall

clinging to branches
some leaves with marmalade hue ~
                            abscission from host


11/7/2020
Any Nature Inspired Haiku
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
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Darlene De Beaulieu November 23, 2020 at 10:58 AM Hello Kim, this is a beautiful poem of Autumn. Enjoy your day my friend. Hgs. Darlene.

Paula Goldsmith November 22, 2020 at 8:40 AM Congratulations on your wonderful haiku win. The marmalade colored leaves are so pretty just like your poem. Enjoy your win..................... Kim Rodrigues November 22, 2020 at 2:36 PM Thank you, Paula!

Jan Allison November 20, 2020 at 9:36 AM Dropping back with my congrats Kim:-) hugs Jan xx Kim Rodrigues November 22, 2020 at 2:36 PM Thank you, Jan!

Andrea Dietrich November 19, 2020 at 5:58 PM a very well deserved win, Kim. Congrats. Kim Rodrigues November 22, 2020 at 2:36 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 19, 2020 at 3:44 PM - Congratulations on your wonderful haiku, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues November 19, 2020 at 4:44 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Tania Kitchin November 19, 2020 at 1:39 PM Kim, congratulations on your silver placement with your creative haiku! Kim Rodrigues November 19, 2020 at 4:44 PM Thank you, Tania <3

David Kavanagh November 8, 2020 at 10:45 AM No ennui here Kim, I love walking through leaves as they fall, invigorating haiku cheers David Kim Rodrigues November 8, 2020 at 11:37 AM When it is dry, watching them fall and flutter is a joy.

Linda Alice Fowler November 8, 2020 at 6:38 AM Nice haiku Kim. Best wishes in the contest! Linda Kim Rodrigues November 8, 2020 at 11:37 AM Thanks, Linda!

W.A. Cholt November 7, 2020 at 3:53 PM Autumn is crystal clear in this picture perfect haiku. Kim Rodrigues November 7, 2020 at 5:40 PM Thank you, W.A.!

Quoth Theraven November 7, 2020 at 11:21 AM Kim, Love your Haiku. Took such a nice fall. -Richard Kim Rodrigues November 7, 2020 at 11:24 AM They gently fall... Thanks, Richard!

Victor Buhagiar November 7, 2020 at 10:26 AM a haiku to be admired. ~~ Kim Rodrigues November 7, 2020 at 11:19 AM Thank you, Victor!

Jan Allison November 7, 2020 at 10:07 AM oh I adore that middle line especially Kim, great Ku Kim:-) hugs jan xx Kim Rodrigues November 7, 2020 at 11:19 AM Thank you, Jan! :)

Andrea Dietrich November 7, 2020 at 9:49 AM very lovely choice of words for your Ku, Kim! Kim Rodrigues November 7, 2020 at 11:18 AM Thanks, Andrea! :)