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Enlightenment Recovery

Knowing the whys and wherefores For the traumas that come into our lives Helping us to open long-concealed doors, It refreshes our spirit and clearly revives. For the traumas that come into our lives We undertake enlightenment recovery It refreshes our spirit, clearly revives Facilitates important inner discovery. We undertake enlightenment recovery As the philosopher said, “Know thyself,” Facilitates important inner discovery, Helping one gain responsibility for oneself. As the philosopher said, “Know thyself,” One understands strengths and flaws Helping one gain responsibility for oneself, Gives us an appreciation for natural laws. One understands strengths and flaws Helping us to open long-concealed doors Gives us an appreciation for natural laws Knowing the whys and wherefores.
NINTH PLACE WINNER Written October 23, 2022 [a Pantoum] Submitted to “ER - Enlightenment Recovery” Poetry Contest Sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 10/26/2022 6:57:00 AM
A study in self-ness. Very nicely penned Milt and an interesting form for this contest. Congratulations on your win. :) Linda
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/26/2022 8:13:00 AM
Thanks so much, Linda.
Date: 10/24/2022 11:11:00 AM
Knowing ourself is tantamount to reaching nirvana on earth if you ask me.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/24/2022 11:57:00 AM
I think so, Caren. Knowing what you can, as well as what you can't, do. Self-awareness is sooo important!
Date: 10/23/2022 6:27:00 PM
Milton I respect how you try all the different forms in contest. I hope you place high on this Contest. Best wishes my friend...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/23/2022 7:47:00 PM
Thanks so much, Michael. That's part of the fun of being here, as far as I'm concerned.
Date: 10/23/2022 4:09:00 PM
I like your entry but I don’t know if I’ll enter this one. I wish you well, Milt.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/23/2022 7:52:00 PM
Jenna, the Pantoum form may be a bit monotonous for a subject like this, although I thought it worked rather well. I'll just have to wait and see. You're welcome to take my thoughts and weave them into something more palatable. Be my guest!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/23/2022 6:18:00 PM
Thanks, Jenna. I really appreciate it. It's always difficult to write this type of entry.

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