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Enlightenment

ENLIGHTENMENT

precepts principals
credos stunned in disbelief
melted lunacy

John G. Lawless
8/11/2014

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2014 5:24:00 PM

Congrats, I hope more people are going to see it now that the contest has been judged.

John Lawless
Date: 9/3/2014 7:09:00 PM

Hey Andrea, it's gotten a few more reads and hits. Thanks for stopping by again and for your continued support.

Mark Trichet

Date: 9/2/2014 9:14:00 PM

Yeh way to go John, loved it.

John Lawless
Date: 9/3/2014 7:08:00 PM

Thanks Mark glad you enjoyed it.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/2/2014 2:54:00 PM

excellent haiku John a worthy winner:-) Hugs Jan xxx

John Lawless
Date: 9/3/2014 7:08:00 PM

Thanks Jan

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/2/2014 12:31:00 PM

- Well written with few words - Well done, John - Congratulations on your 8th place in the contest :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

John Lawless
Date: 9/3/2014 7:08:00 PM

Anne Lise, always nice to hear from you, thanks.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/2/2014 9:36:00 AM

John, this is a masterpiece! I love this excellent haiku! Congratulations on your win! Pandita

John Lawless
Date: 9/3/2014 7:07:00 PM

Thank you Pandita for your high praise.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/2/2014 7:03:00 AM

Oh John that's brilliant my friend! Melted lunacy,, lovely phrase,, congrats on awesome win!

John Lawless
Date: 9/3/2014 7:05:00 PM

Thanks for stopping in to read and comment.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/2/2014 4:56:00 AM

Congrats on the win, John

John Lawless
Date: 9/3/2014 7:06:00 PM

Thanks for your continued support.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2014 4:42:00 PM

oh I love that one line: melted lunacy!!

John Lawless
Date: 8/13/2014 6:54:00 PM

Thanks Andrea for finding this one. It sorta slipped through the cracks.

Enlightenment

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