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Enlightenment

Trawlermen haul cod Glistening scales gleam in the sun Fleet enlightenment

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/3/2014 5:25:00 PM
I really like this one, enlightenment in the environment of some dirty fishing nets!! Congrats.
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theresa stephens
Date: 9/10/2014 6:08:00 AM
Where is my head? It should read haiku not tanka, Doh!!
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Date: 9/10/2014 5:50:00 AM
Hi Andrea, I just happened to be watching a TV programme about deep sea fishing at the time I had to come up with this tanka !!!. So glad you liked it. Thank you for contacting with your kind comments. Regards Theresa xx
Date: 9/2/2014 2:58:00 PM
dropping back with my congratulations:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/10/2014 5:51:00 AM
Hi Jan, Thank you for taking the time for sending your most welcome comments and congrats. Bless you. Theresa xx
Date: 9/2/2014 12:32:00 PM
- Lovely haiku, Theresa -well done -   Congratulations on your 8th place in the contest :)
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Date: 9/10/2014 5:53:00 AM
Thank you sooo much Anne Lise. So pleased you liked it and much appreciate your congrats and positive comments. All the best Theresa xx
Date: 9/2/2014 8:14:00 AM
congrats on your placement, Do I sense a bit of "tongue in cheek" in the use of the word "fleet"....fleet of ships....fleet of foot.. fleet enlightenment
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Date: 9/10/2014 5:59:00 AM
Hi John, Alas, no, I wish I had thought of it though. So pleased you enjoyed it and your congrats. and thank you for contacting. Regards Theresa xx
Date: 9/2/2014 7:06:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome haiku Theresa!
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theresa stephens
Date: 9/10/2014 6:01:00 AM
Thank you Dr Upma, your kind comments mean a lot. Much appreciate you reading it. All the best to you, Theresa xx
Date: 9/2/2014 4:57:00 AM
Came back to congratulate you for this fine win, theresa
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theresa stephens
Date: 9/10/2014 6:03:00 AM
Hi Dr Ram, Your kind comments and congrats are most appreciated. Thank you. Regards Theresa xx
Date: 8/11/2014 12:17:00 PM
Great imagery good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan x
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theresa stephens
Date: 9/10/2014 6:04:00 AM
Hi Jan, So pleased you enjoyed reading it. Thank you for your lovely comment. All the best, Theresa xx
Date: 8/11/2014 6:26:00 AM
Lovely imagery of the ocean and fish, theresa
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theresa stephens
Date: 9/10/2014 6:06:00 AM
Hi Dr. Ram, Thank you for taking the time to read and for sending your positive comment. Regards Theresa xx