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~ July 2, 2023 ~

~ A Quintain (Sicilian) Contest) by Emile Pinet ~

Alone, where winds had smoothed the cobblestone, a young novice sat, solemn and austere, brooding over mistakes made, seeds past sown. Entering the abbey; a fate severe, she wept with sadness when dismay had grown. Praying, she cried, "In Your Word I abide." Her soul ached; tears were silently falling. "Strengthen my faith, Father. Be at my side. Forgive my despair. This is my calling. I know from You there's nothing I can hide." Stark loneliness grew; hope quickly dwindled. In solitude her days would reach their end. Then came enlightenment. Faith rekindled in whispers to her as angels descend. She dropped skeins of yarn, carefully spindled. Down on penitent knees she bent and bowed. "Forgive my apathy. I've been a fool to hesitate, Father, for I have vowed my humble life to serve beneath Your rule." With an overjoyed heart, she spoke aloud.

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Date: 8/1/2023 11:10:00 PM
We stoop to conquer ~ warmest congratulations on your podium finish, Lin, God bless
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Date: 8/1/2023 7:08:00 PM
Beautifully written, Lin! I could feel the emotions in your words. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/31/2023 2:23:00 PM
Dropping back with many congrats on your podium placement:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/31/2023 2:06:00 PM
Congratulations Lin! Your poem earned you "Second Place" in my contest. You should be proud of your placing, there were many good poems submitted, yet your poem rose to a podium position, well done, my friend, Emile.
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Date: 7/3/2023 11:14:00 AM
Aloud, as the clouds part, and the Lord’s mercy and grace descend. What a good God he is! He waits for us to drop our yarn…
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/3/2023 11:26:00 AM
He’s always ready to reach for us with His right hand, Kim. I’d drop everything too. He asks little of us. Thank you.
Date: 7/3/2023 2:04:00 AM
Great story of the novice nun who is wondering about her worthiness, Lin:)
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Date: 7/3/2023 2:55:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Jo. I gave thought to her situation from a story I read years ago. Her plight stayed with me and so... here is my version of what may have happened to her.
Date: 7/2/2023 12:26:00 PM
aww Lin, this is such a touching poem. I am sure many novices entering an abbey will have doubts over their past failings and suitability but hopefully their faith will pull them through. hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/3/2023 2:54:00 AM
Hi Jan and thank you for finding these lines to your liking. We all have doubts and regrets over our past failings. Faith sees us through. Hugs to you, too.

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