Enjoy

Enjoy being young, the downward
rush of seeming omnipotence; too
soon the flow, inevitably will slow,
and then, the upstream paddle – 

enjoy being moist and juiced...
before the creak and the rattle –

although youth may seem an
unfair battle at times, with challenges
insurmountable, often one pleading
for a divine arbiter, old-age reveals 
the true tensile of character –  and
the worth of a trying journey before the
welcoming gurney –

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Date: 2/4/2022 1:40:00 PM
This is cute! Enjoyed reading. Take Care!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/4/2022 6:06:00 PM
Hi Valerie; thank you so much. This was fun to write. Blessings my friend!
Date: 1/26/2022 11:30:00 AM
this is a journey we all must take Joe, we can't be young forever, the secret is staying limb, at all ages, nicely written piece, have a great day :)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/26/2022 12:19:00 PM
Nobody leaves this earth Healthy:) Thank you, Mystic. I'm always grateful. I am really doing fine for my age, a little slower to be safe -- but few exceptions. Blessings my friend!
Date: 1/26/2022 3:48:00 AM
It is a shame that no one young will realize this truth until they begin to feel age creeping up on them. I am always relating this to my granddaughter. I want her to appreciate her knees and not injure them because years later she will feel it. She injured her foot and had to limp around and I think she got it! Lol Your poem gives excellent advice Joe. Your ending is classic! Into my faves! Blessings xxoo
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/26/2022 4:48:00 AM
Thank you, Connie; my heart is all smiles...amazing how smart our parents become as we get older. Oh would they have learned sooner:) Blessings my friend. Have a beautiful day!
Date: 1/25/2022 5:02:00 PM
Your poem is lovely and offers sage advice, Joe. A true gem! Evelyn
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/26/2022 4:50:00 AM
Thank you, Evelyn; I keep trying to wise up...once in awhile I get something near right. Thank you for letting me know this one has some honest merit. Blessings my friend. Have a beautiful day!
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