Premiere Contest WinnerEnigmatic Blue

Your essence pervades the depths unto the heights
And sprinkles spring gardens with posies of remembrance.
You grace the robes of the humble Virgin
Yet fan majestic strutting pride.
Without you a celestial promise would be incomplete
And how you love to turn up unexpectedly;
Startling star amidst golden corn, 
Mesmerizing monarch of shallow streams.
Our feelings are tinted by you
And you colour the windows of the soul.
You course through veins of noble birth
And daub the beggar's frozen skin.
You are faithful and loyal, all-embracing, enigmatic blue.


06/01/19

Your Best Poem That Is Trophy Worthy (Premiere Contest Trophy) Contest 4 Poetry Contest : sponsored by Tania Kitchin
'Blue Poetry Contest' : sponsored by Craig Cornish
'2019 Poetry Marathon Mile 27 Poetry Contest' : sponsored by Mark Toney
'Strength Thru Adversity Poetry Contest' : sponsored by Gregory Barden
Contest 600,Any Free Verse ,Any Theme,Up To A Max Of 20 Lines Poetry Contest :sponsored by Brian Strand
'Best Free Verse 2019 Poetry Contest' : sponsored by John Hamilton
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Alex Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 12:45 AM
Congratulations, again~!
Agustin Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 4:47 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your muse on "blueness"... expounded wisely through your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
Kauffman Avatar
November 8, 2021 at 1:53 PM
So wonderful to see this on the winners list again garnering further honors. So many memorable lines - "you color the windows of the soul." So nice to see it, and you, on the winners list. Congratulations. Hope we see more of your delightful creations!
Canerdy Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 11:51 AM
Wendy, CONGRATS on your win with this magnificent poem! Janice
Alex Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 3:16 AM
A great poem on the color blue. Beautiful imagery. Congratulations!
Watt Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 10:02 AM
I enjoyed reading your tribute to the color blue, Wendy. Congrats to you for your recent win and many past awards for this stunning poetry, a rare Wendy Watson free verse! Lovely in every way ~ John
Chiri Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 7:03 AM
Back to congratulate you again on your HM!;)
Chiri Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 8:15 PM
Congrats on your placement Wendy!;)
Hamilton Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 7:57 PM
Nice write Wendy, congrats on a fine placement!
Carber Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 11:57 AM
Well, Wendy, I gotta love this one as blue is my favorite color.
Ashley Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 10:10 PM
Your poem conveys meaningful and poignant beauty with such lush imagery, Wendy. Each and every line is poetic perfection. Congratulations on your excellent win in Brian's contest. warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Ravidas Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 5:58 PM
Perfect gold on enigmatic blue. Congrats, Wendy)
Ibeh Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 3:04 PM
A great poem with amazing imagery, Wendy:-) Heartiest congratulations on your top win!
Roper Avatar
March 25, 2019 at 10:20 PM
Beautiful, Wendy , congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
Drowley Avatar
March 25, 2019 at 1:05 PM
Wendy, Congratulations on your win. I really liked the line: "Mesmerizing monarch of shallow streams." David :)
Toney Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 9:32 PM
Wendy, I enjoyed this at the first read, but I came to appreciate it more when I began to understand each line's meaning. Brilliant! I especially love "Without you a celestial promise would be incomplete." Congratulations on your first-place win on Mile 26 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest. Only 1 contest to go before the final! ~Mark
Godwin Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 9:06 PM
Congratulations, your poem is beautiful - absolutely!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 10:55 PM
I was carried away with your visions of blue Wendy. This is stunning. I am so happy to see it high on the winner's list.Congratulations! : ) xxoo
Sands Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 4:39 PM
Congratulations for your win Wendy :)
Watson Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 4:44 PM
Thank you Heidi. An unexpected surprise!
Cornish Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 4:20 PM
Wendy, thanks for this, exactly where I was hoping you would go with the muse - somewhere unpredictable--there is something under/between this beyond different exceptions of blue or bluish. I also have some Welsh roots but mostly Plymouth County roots and I also was at first restricted by rhythm and rhyme but on occasion, when you get that 'A one & a two &" out of the mind, you're free to write as you have done so well here--it is your free poetic mind that is your gift.
Cornish Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 8:16 PM
Ahha! Makes perfect sense now not that it needed to--wow!
Watson Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 4:44 PM
This was a very special win for reasons you've established above. Thank you for appreciating the enigmatic flavour and for such encouraging comments. I trust you caught sight of the kingfisher en route!?
Allison Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 3:40 PM
definitely an enigmatic tribute Wendy, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Watson Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 4:41 PM
Thank you,Jan. Not a patch on the lyricism and originality of the first three but I'm very happy that Craig saw something to appreciate in it.
Gauthier Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 3:30 PM
A most graceful and beautiful tribute, Wendy. Congrats on your win.
Watson Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 3:43 PM
Thank you, Line. I wonder if readers get the same 'answers' to my riddles as I intended!
Devonshire Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 2:29 PM
Gosh, this is really well-penned, Wendy. I like the way you cover so many aspects of "blue." Congratulations on your win in Craig's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
Watson Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 3:33 PM
Thank you so much,Carolyn. This was a pleasant surprise as I am not that good or experienced in the area of free verse as rhythm and rhyme is in my blood!
Krutsinger Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 3:37 PM
I was toying with entering this contest. I know I could not top this one at all, or even come near enough to touch its hem, but I might be able to get last place now.
Watson Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 3:57 PM
That's kind of you Caren though I'm unsure how Craig will react to my riddles! Free verse is definitely not my forté but sometimes you need to step out of your comfort zone. You do far greater justice to this genre than you think!
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