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Enduring a Monsoon

I was awakened by the sounds of clatters and thumps as a whoosh of breeze made my window blinds thud. I rose with a groan and felt the rise of goose bumps on my skin. Frigid morning air was chilling my blood. Far in the distance was the boom of thunder's roar. No cockle-doodle-do would I hear at break of dawn, for the wise rooster knew rains would soon begin to pour. There'd be no more sleep for me as I stifled a yawn. I shuffled to the kitchen as the wind began to howl. While coffee was brewing, my new pup started to bark. I whispered, "Alright, boy. It's just the hoot of an owl." Creaks and clangs always sound scarier when it's dark. A tempest wind rattled my windows with a loud clatter. The rumble of more thunder caused my heart to flutter. Rain splashed against the panes with a resonant splatter, and then I heard "WHAM BAM," and off flew my shutter. I hushed my dog when he began to whimper and whine and decided to build a fire, all the while humming a tune. Finally, he relaxed when the rain stopped, just before nine. We slept until noon, after enduring that dreadful monsoon. July 18th, 2022 Onomatopoeia Contest Sponsor: Emile Pinet checked with rhymezone

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Date: 7/31/2022 7:11:00 AM
Jenna, a wonderful captivating poem, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2022 12:37:00 PM
Thanks very much, Tania.
Date: 7/30/2022 7:39:00 PM
Awesome poetry, Jenna. The words, the visual, they both complimented one another beautifully.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/31/2022 4:51:00 AM
I'm pleased that you enjoyed this one. Thanks, Shane.
Date: 7/30/2022 4:36:00 PM
Congrats Jenna on a wonderful win. Your poem is delightful and charming. Love the addition of the pup. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/31/2022 4:50:00 AM
Hi Gina, and thank you very much.
Date: 7/30/2022 1:18:00 PM
Hi Jenna. I think this must be a write from your personal experience a couple of years ago - you captured it oh so well! Congratulations on your well-deserved placement in Emile's contest! Linda
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/30/2022 3:32:00 PM
This is total fiction, Linda. Thanks for liking it!
Date: 7/30/2022 11:45:00 AM
Jenna, you transported all of us into the fury of the storm. I'm back to say congratulations on your placement in Emile's top ten!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/30/2022 3:32:00 PM
Thanks, dear Milt. I'll have to read the contest results in just a bit.
Date: 7/30/2022 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations Jenna! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my "Onomatopoeia Poetry Contest." This contest had 34 poems entered and yet yours rose to the top ten, you should be proud of your placing, this was a fun contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/30/2022 3:32:00 PM
Thank you very much for including my poem on your winning list, Emile. You host true contests, and I appreciate you for it.
Date: 7/18/2022 2:08:00 PM
You captured it well Jenna, In some parts of the world its non stop rain for weeks. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/18/2022 3:39:00 PM
Thank you very kindly for your encouraging remarks, Tom.
Date: 7/18/2022 1:13:00 PM
The sounds alone would send me deep into the covers.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/18/2022 3:39:00 PM
I doubt that, but thanks for being afraid. lol
Date: 7/18/2022 12:11:00 PM
loved this wonderfully descriptive write
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/18/2022 3:38:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jack. It's nice of you to visit and leave a comment.
Date: 7/18/2022 11:01:00 AM
Isn't the English language fun, Jenna? I daresay that in no other language could one capture sounds with words like this. BOL in the contest.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/18/2022 12:02:00 PM
It certainly presents an opportunity to write onomatopoeia. Thanks for the supportive comment, Jim.

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