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Enduring

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     Spotless
    her curves

  Breath taking
     her stare 


     Enduring

    mine want

passionfree verse

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Amy Green

April 3, 2014 at 3:52 AM

You are leaving me breathless, more and more, with each poem I read.

James Peranteau

June 1, 2021 at 10:40 PM

Seven yearz later, never too late to say ty.....much love dear poet, james

Brenda Victoria Northeast

January 20, 2012 at 4:56 PM

Yes how sweet are those sweet cherries small but succinct in flavor. Blessings and thank you too for your visit and comments, Brenda : )

Elizabeth Wesley

January 12, 2012 at 7:55 PM

Those ten words say more than some people do in a book.

Daver Austin

September 29, 2011 at 4:14 PM

Da da, da da, da da! How absolutely short, sweet, and to the point. Love, daver

Debbie Guzzi

September 10, 2011 at 8:28 PM

ut oh...hopefully all went well! light & love

Kyle Kriticos

September 7, 2011 at 10:45 PM

Hahaha thats cool james good job !

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

August 25, 2011 at 8:15 PM

Wonderful write James....and thanks so much for your nice comments on my poems and for all of your help.....smiles.....chiquita

James Peranteau

June 1, 2021 at 10:36 PM

Gonna make sure that I peek at your writes love....have a blessed Spring....much love, james

James Foulk

August 21, 2011 at 3:38 PM

a great write. thankyou for commenting on my poetry.

Wilma Neels

August 21, 2011 at 2:41 PM

Enduring indeed James, gosh you have me smiling again.. :) love it!! Hope your weekend is going great.. Mine is just about over lol ~ love Wilma

James Peranteau

June 1, 2021 at 10:37 PM

*smiles at ya ten yearz later...much love, james

Jack Ross Jr.

August 21, 2011 at 1:10 PM

Wonderful write mate, see beauties all the time, put a twinkle in this old mans eyes, lol.....with love....old Jack

Carolyn Devonshire

August 20, 2011 at 5:26 PM

Beautiful, James. On the beach here I sometimes see men who take my breath away. Unfortunately, I'm old enough to be their mother. LOL Awesome poem, dear friend. Thanks for your comments on the toad. Every word of it is true. Love, Carolyn

Elizabeth Wesley

August 20, 2011 at 10:09 AM

Wow James, this seethes with so few words! Trust me, I enjoyed.

Enduring

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