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Endless Space

Endless Space (Balloon) Far beyond earthly soil a breathless view in every direction flying in a gentle wind up slowly out of sight above pillow clouds into the clear blue great universe ever endless free space high in the blue sky over the mountain and the seven seas through the rainbow close to the heaven into the Lord's world Erich J.Goller Copyright 10.29.2009 "Balloon" new form 10.29.2009 by Erich J.Goller Balloon 12 lines 1/2/3/4/7/7/6/5/5/4/4/2 syllables rope 5 lines 1/1/1/1/1 syllables gondola car 5 lines 5/5/5/5/5 syllables rhyming optional...any subject

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Date: 10/12/2012 11:17:00 AM
I am so happy to be able to read some of your amazing poetry today Erich. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. I will be back another day to read through more of your poetry. Love, Carol
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Erich Goller
Date: 10/12/2012 11:27:00 AM
thank you very much Carol,I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.Hugs!Erich
Date: 2/12/2012 10:22:00 AM
good morning..Erich, i love your new form... can you imagine all the non-stop feeling in a ballon...rising with the heights of the blue ocean above.. this is filled with the perfect air..for the perfect flight... have a nice.. blessed Sunday..always..pd
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Date: 2/12/2012 10:44:00 AM
Good morning. Thank you very much.I glad you liked the poem and form.Hugs!Erich

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