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Endless love

      The silver moon embraced the lonely sky
           their love surpassed eternity,
               heaven and earth 
                  became ONE
                     The  Endless love 
                         glorified their souls.
                           





Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/19/2016 4:34:00 PM
Hello Red Fiery . . . This verse is naturally ethereal and quite enchanting. You've managed to do so much here in only 22 words. The emotive imagery you used here captures the reader's attention immediately. Great Write and a "7"!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 3/12/2016 10:09:00 AM
I bet erupting volcanoes wouldn't disturb this scene.
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Date: 9/18/2013 2:01:00 AM
Beautiful visuals I got from this fantastically written poem. Looking forward to reading more soon. Always, Laura
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/10/2016 8:18:00 PM
Thank you Laura..:)
Date: 9/16/2013 8:57:00 AM
This is great it looks like a bird taking flight. Have a great day Red!
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/10/2016 8:18:00 PM
:)
Date: 9/16/2013 2:56:00 AM
Lovely write, my dear...simply lovely!
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/10/2016 8:18:00 PM
you are a sweetheart :)
Date: 9/15/2013 9:34:00 PM
An adjoining of heartbeats in short & directly honest emotions. Nicely done!
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