Red Fiery Poet Free verse

Endless Love

The silver moon embraced the lonely sky
           their love surpassed eternity,
               heaven and earth 
                  became ONE
                     The  Endless love 
                         glorified their souls.

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Gary Bateman May 19, 2016 at 4:34 PM Hello Red Fiery . . . This verse is naturally ethereal and quite enchanting. You've managed to do so much here in only 22 words. The emotive imagery you used here captures the reader's attention immediately. Great Write and a "7"!! Cheers and Best, Gary

John-Ovan.P. Hull March 12, 2016 at 10:09 AM I bet erupting volcanoes wouldn't disturb this scene.

Laura Breidenthal September 18, 2013 at 2:01 AM Beautiful visuals I got from this fantastically written poem. Looking forward to reading more soon. Always, Laura Red Fiery March 10, 2016 at 8:18 PM Thank you Laura..:)

Richard Lamoureux September 16, 2013 at 8:57 AM This is great it looks like a bird taking flight. Have a great day Red! Red Fiery March 10, 2016 at 8:18 PM :)

Eileen Manassian September 16, 2013 at 2:56 AM Lovely write, my dear...simply lovely! Red Fiery March 10, 2016 at 8:18 PM you are a sweetheart :)

Poet Tacito September 15, 2013 at 9:34 PM An adjoining of heartbeats in short & directly honest emotions. Nicely done!