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Endless Love

Created in the city of steel
emerald eyes cast out in stone
my endless love harmonized
yet so radical, hard
an understanding
not yet controlled
but true love 
prevails
here

© Harry J Horsman 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Devnath  Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 11:11 AM
It's very difficult to understand the great heart and your synthesis is nicely done. True love is always uncontrolled. Thanks.., loved always, bl
Johnson Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 3:29 PM
Love and hate is at the gate of yesterday's tomorrows. When eyes disguise the souls allure. There's nothing there but sorrow. Just rhyming Harry. Have an endlessly lovely day. Peace. :)
Komala Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 10:36 PM
hi my dearest Harry..just stopping by to say my happiness and love...so glad to see you back in reading and supports...and YES you have a very lovely heart <3take care... luv and hugs far off <3 Sk
Anderson-Throop Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 5:56 AM
no matter which form you use, your style remains consistent ....and romantic... (To me it sounds like it is to a car..or am I REALLY crazier than I thought?)
Ink-U-Script Avatar
April 4, 2013 at 10:48 AM
Thanks for stopping by Harry always...the title here captured me. I love the imagery here and how strong the emotions are epressed in this Nonet. Beautifully done!!
Lamoureux Avatar
April 3, 2013 at 10:52 PM
Not familiar with the form but I really like it. It's also intresting to look at.
Martin Avatar
April 1, 2013 at 3:27 PM
Harry, I like the way you've weaved the visual, creative and emotional parts of this poem together to make for a very interesting poetic read. Nicely done and thanks for stopping by my place earlier and commenting on "The Funny Side of Suicide." Hope to see more of your interesting work in the future. Cheers, Terry
Gasun Avatar
March 30, 2013 at 7:10 PM
Great expression of endless love in your powerful and outstanding poem my dear friend Harry. It reminds me of my most favourite piano piece which was a theme song in the Ice Castle movie & has the same title as your stellar poem. Thank you so much for sharing! Happy Easter! love/hugs, Leonora
Carrillo Avatar
March 30, 2013 at 3:57 PM
True love prevails. That sounds great to me. may it be true for you. Have a great day......... lucy
Widjanarko Avatar
March 30, 2013 at 11:30 AM
This is wonderfully awesome! I loved the strong feeling which deeply surrounds your poem, especially the climax point on the last line, love it! :D hug, Yanny
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 6:05 PM
Harry, this one is interesting. I sometimes wonder what inspires your poetry. This one seems different! an endless love in the city of steel!! It's a metaphor?
Andresen Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 12:15 PM
Forever and always ...... it is LOVELY, Harry! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 12:08 PM
Harry an excellent nonet, Happy Easter...David
Jones Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 11:25 AM
Harry, this leaves one hanging wondering and is awesome....true love prevails here stands alone....Donna
Manassian Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 10:58 AM
Harry, like Tim I'm left to wonder.....where...who! So interesting. One think I love about your work...you are a hopeless romantic as I am. It's good to have a kindred spirit! Thanks for the visit! Hugs!
Manassian Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 10:59 AM
OOOPPPSSSS....One thing I love about your work....bla bla bla. ;) Sorry for the typo
Ryerson Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 10:16 AM
Not sure of which 'city of steel' you refer to Harry, but that makes it all the more mysterious and compelling to me (Pittsburgh maybe?) Great use of this very difficult form as well...Have a happy and blessed Easter my friend - Tim
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 10:01 AM
I really like this one too harry xx
Bellville Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 9:56 AM
I really liked this poem. Great write.
Komala Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 9:31 AM
so lovely and beautiful.. what a stunning Nonet :) enjoyed much dear friend Harry <3 :) nice write
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